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Critique By:
Nick Karagiaouroglou (K:127263)
12/13/2008 5:02:07 PM
That would really be best way Arvin. Direct comparison is always better. I tried burning the midtones a bit and even slightlier the highlights of the background street and attached the image. Well, I don't see any difference. The main character stands out so strongly that it dooesn't matter the light of the street. That's how it seems to me.
Cheers!
Nick
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
12/13/2008 12:39:30 PM
drawn with van alsburgs pencils!
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
12/12/2008 10:03:49 PM
excellent news indeed.. yeah I have been shooting lots of out of date stuff lately.. good fun
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Critique By:
Arvin Alston (K:1495)
12/12/2008 9:12:13 PM
this project gave me tons of ideas, i just got 5 new roll today to play with :)
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
12/12/2008 9:09:33 PM
yeah nice work indeed
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
12/12/2008 9:00:42 PM
excellent... just jawdroppingly wonderful
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Critique By:
Arvin Alston (K:1495)
12/12/2008 7:44:00 PM
thank you for the kind words. i like to experiment with many side of photography. glad you admire my work.
im still up in the air about the street. i can see both sides. maybe i should post a 2nd version to compare to.
thanks again!
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Critique By:
Nick Karagiaouroglou (K:127263)
12/12/2008 7:14:28 PM
Your whole portfolio is fill of such interesting thumbs, Arvin, that it made it impossible for me to decide which one to click! So at the end I just took this one. And it was even more than I expected from the thumb.
A great plasticity of the face though it is not as near to the camera, by a very good usage of lights and shadows on it. The good details and the vivid but not exaggerated coloring provide another eye magnet. Especially the skin hues, which are so hard to get right, seem to simply flow naturally on her face, neck and arms. Perhaps some small overexposure in small areas of the arms ot the right side of her chin, which nonetheless intergate well and enhance the plasticity I already mentioned.
I think that Paul Lara would have fun for some sessions in your company! ;-) And I think that this is a very very good example for good photography - a good lesson for studying for the many wannabes. BTW, contrary to Paul I don't think that the street behind would be better darkened. I also thought that doing that would allow her light to stand out even stronger, but there was no real chance.
Cheers!
Nick
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
12/12/2008 5:38:31 PM
I like this, holgas look like fun :)
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Critique By:
jacques brisebois (K:73883)
12/7/2008 8:20:21 PM
real nice sexy capture and model, very nice pose, a real nice work Arvin.
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Critique By:
The Pilgrim (K:65007)
12/6/2008 2:56:01 PM
Excellent location portrait! Love the colors and pose of your model. Great colors and skin tones. Lighting and exposure are well handled! Great work!
Congrats!
Paul E Brumit
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
12/5/2008 2:11:05 PM
Bella la modelo y simpática la pose.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
12/5/2008 8:24:21 AM
Nice pose on the model and excellent depth to the capture.
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Critique By:
Alfredo Piñeyro (K:6609)
11/28/2008 12:00:36 PM
Muy bonita foto y muy buena composición, también.
Todo lo mejor,
AP
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
11/28/2008 9:03:25 AM
Yes to the lights!
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Critique By:
Clay Boutin (K:28722)
11/27/2008 5:35:35 AM
Lovely model and nice lighting. Well done.
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Critique By:
Mustafa KUSAKSIZ (K:1022)
11/26/2008 8:06:24 PM
very nice photo.nice composition
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
11/26/2008 6:35:13 PM
This is vivid, wonderfully posed and framed, Arvin. Ash is really cute. NICE shooting, you two.
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Critique By:
Alfredo Piñeyro (K:6609)
11/25/2008 1:12:08 PM
Great shoot. Beautiful colours
Congrats
AP
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
11/25/2008 1:00:10 AM
great capture, works so well :)
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Critique By:
jacques brisebois (K:73883)
11/22/2008 3:16:36 PM
real sensual capture, very nice work... and model :)
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Critique By:
Aungsita Chatterjee (K:19843)
11/22/2008 6:54:22 AM
good one. nice capture.
bubai.
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Critique By:
Aungsita Chatterjee (K:19843)
11/22/2008 5:34:20 AM
good composition bt colour tone is too warm.
regards
bubai.
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
11/22/2008 2:38:03 AM
I like the colour and angle on this capture, nice 1.
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
11/15/2008 3:27:22 AM
Intensa y sensual.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Arvin Alston (K:1495)
11/14/2008 10:38:04 PM
i know its just a play on innocence
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Critique By:
Mario G. Dupré M. (K:220)
11/14/2008 9:32:34 PM
Excelente color, el espejo le da un toque, y los tatuajes también, gran captura, felicitaciones
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Critique By:
jacques brisebois (K:73883)
11/14/2008 9:30:06 PM
too hot, so sexy, sensual pose, model and look... real ncie job Arvin... not sure for innocence :)
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
11/14/2008 9:10:39 PM
one two three
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Critique By:
Alfredo Piñeyro (K:6609)
11/14/2008 12:54:40 PM
Una captura muy sensual, con magnificos detalles y muy bien presentado.
Felicitaciones!!
AP
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