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Critique By:
pan g. (K:16899)
7/11/2005 11:10:21 AM
A very sensual image Alaria.
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Critique By:
sherif hussein (K:13815)
6/12/2005 12:13:30 AM
Nice catch of this beautiful sun set
Sherif
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Critique By:
sherif hussein (K:13815)
6/12/2005 12:11:22 AM
Very nice composition
Sherif
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Critique By:
sherif hussein (K:13815)
6/12/2005 12:09:57 AM
Very nice catch of a beautiful place ,but the coloures do not look natural may be over saturated ......
Sherif
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Critique By:
Andreas Droussiotis (K:4757)
6/6/2005 2:33:14 PM
Very good Alaria ,although there is reddish tint in the atmosphere, which can be very easily corrected.I would have cropped out the shadows on the bottom of the picture.The angle from which you shot the picture is very good as well.
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Critique By:
Andreas Droussiotis (K:4757)
6/6/2005 2:25:43 PM
Beautiful!
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Critique By:
Hakan AKIRMAK (K:15913)
6/6/2005 1:35:13 PM
Great work Alaria! I very like it! Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Lucas L (K:12145)
6/6/2005 12:42:42 PM
nice photo and brife,
the quality of scan could be improved ....
regards.
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
6/6/2005 6:54:59 AM
Very good shot, Alaria. You have done really well here, to get some blur into this picture, as it adds a great sense of the action. Very colourful costumes and make-up!
I also like the angle and composition you have chosen. The attention is clearly on the first performer, but the inclusion of the other performers, in sharp focus on the background, has added support to the main subject. The background helps explain what is going on: a street parade.
Very nice work.
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Critique By:
Ahmet KASIMOGLU (K:2137)
6/5/2005 9:27:54 AM
very good. congr Alaria!...
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
6/4/2005 5:58:41 PM
Alaria,
Whatever it was, you need to get rid of it in PS. I did so in the pic I uploaded.
You have a great eye for a picture. Just need to pay a bit more attention to some details, so your beautiful work is not let down by poor presentation.
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
6/4/2005 3:48:57 PM
Very nice sunset photo, Alaria.
Good exposure for the light areas, leaving the shade as dark silhouette.
Good stuff.
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Critique By:
Zé Ovo (K:7579)
6/4/2005 3:21:04 PM
Very nice composition!
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
6/4/2005 3:06:23 PM
Thank you Angelo, appreciate your comments. That dirt was due to something left on scanner glass surface...that was actually the first time I experiment with this kind of photography; took a bit of hard work - waking up early to capture in right light; climbing to that specific landscape scenery; carrying a bag of clothes and telling the model how to pose! if you take a look at, 'Crimson Blush' that is another photo of her...
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
6/4/2005 1:29:53 PM
You is???
That's a shock...
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
6/4/2005 1:17:42 PM
what Angelo said!
(I'll admit, i's a beautiful model in a sexy pose)
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
6/4/2005 10:37:37 AM
Nice idea, Alaria. The scene is nice, the model is gorgeous, the pose is attractive.
The execution needs to be improved, though, for it to be a great shot.
There's a big scratch/dirt line on the top left. That's "numero uno" and need to be retouched out.
Then the framing: the hand, foot and let are cut off by the frame. I would try to get at least her left hand and foot to be uncut.
The colours and contrast could use a bit of work, or maybe not, depending on your personal taste.
One further suggestion I would make is if you would like to try this as a b&w. I think it would look nice.
Hope you don't mind, I tried this out...
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
5/20/2005 9:21:54 AM
Thanks Jorge, messing around with the contrast can create different effects...will watch out next time!
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Critique By:
Jorge Gonzalez (K:342)
5/20/2005 2:05:43 AM
nice lighting and pose....but perhaps "too" much red?....you can see it in her skin,rocks and water in the background
Regards
Jorge
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
5/20/2005 12:15:57 AM
This was rather a fun experience with the model! Involved a bit of planning...Waking up early to capture in soft light...Climbing up the mountain with a bag of clothes for the added benefits of landscape scenery... ~Alaria~
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Critique By:
Jaime Navarro (K:398)
5/19/2005 6:23:55 AM
what a sunset señorina,is a beautiful take!
jaime.
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
5/18/2005 11:55:23 PM
~blinks~ did not expect a comment right after uploading! Thanks Nacho xxx
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
5/18/2005 11:38:22 PM
beautiful bucolic image. stunning.
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Critique By:
Andreas Droussiotis (K:4757)
5/18/2005 1:41:36 PM
Thanks for your message and your offer.I'll be out of town for few days-until next Wed 25/5/05.
Maybe we meet then.Keep in contact.
Andreas
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Critique By:
Andreas Droussiotis (K:4757)
5/18/2005 1:19:56 PM
Alaria ,i like the composition.
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
5/17/2005 11:12:02 AM
Greetings! Thanks for the positive comments - found them very encouraging. I must add that your photo (trip to rockies) with red flowers and landscape scenery was absolutely captivating!
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
5/16/2005 11:00:01 PM
awesome stunning mood.
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
5/16/2005 10:59:41 PM
wonderful tones. exquisite composition. cong.
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Critique By:
Alaria Zilfo (K:42)
5/16/2005 10:40:37 PM
Kalispera! Good to bump into a keen photographer from the same town...I like the work you have done on portraits. Being in the shoes of a photographer, I have the urge to capture and be the subject...would you like to add another expressive face to your portfolio?
Alaria.
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Critique By:
Andreas Droussiotis (K:4757)
5/16/2005 6:52:40 PM
Welcome!
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