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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
11/12/2008 2:50:53 AM
It seems you crop the picture to 6x6 format. The man behind is rather distracting. What if you use a lens with big appeture, say F1.8 to make the background blur and the lady would be outstanding? Or you just use wide angle to take the whole scene of burning candle and people around to recorde the atmosphere as documenatory.
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| Photo By: Andy Seehusen
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
11/12/2008 2:41:39 AM
Thanks Andy for your suggetions. I looked at your pictures. It's nice and clean in composition. The most scenes are in China, even in shanghai. It is my hometown.
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/5/2008 4:01:30 AM
Thanks James for good suggestion. Yes, you are right. It would be better with dark frame around it.
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/5/2008 3:52:26 AM
I am so touched by this photo. I can see how you look at ordinary people with respect and most of all love even in a foreign country unkown to you. The picture its self is carefully composed, natural expression of two sisters, so peaceful feeling. Though poor but they are content about what Bhuda arranged and planned. They are living with dignity in countryside with more pure mind than people in metropolitan like me. I also noticed you low down your body when taking this photo so that you eye contacting throught your lens with two girls are almost in paralle. Thank you so much for sharing this wondeful portrait of my countrywomen!
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/5/2008 3:34:17 AM
It is very informative photo with your remarks below photo. I heard different story about these long neck women. It goes like this: if she has some afairs with other man and if her husband got to know, he will then remove the rings. Result is just what you mentioned...
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/5/2008 3:21:22 AM
I like this scene though I get used to. For I am living in this area. You have eyes which refect the real daily life of ordinary people in certain area. A little town with peaceful atmosphere. This is what you documentary photo created. Thanks for sharing.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/5/2008 3:12:25 AM
Hi James,I feel so sorry for myself that I didn't realize that you had three comments already. You are right that if I had managed to include girl's right hand it would be better composition frame. Thanks for your suggestion. Besides, these days I also realize beside subject you also should take care of background which sometimes plays significant effect. Thank you very very much. Hope you enjoy phtography as ever.
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
7/13/2007 2:12:23 AM
Nice portrait. You have the same lens as mine. unusual angle with nice bokeh at background.
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| Photo By: p L a T i N u M _ Q a T a R
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
7/13/2007 2:09:38 AM
thanks for yor comment.
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
6/16/2007 3:56:34 PM
Unique angle and striking black and white tone!
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| Photo By: Sandip Aine
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
6/16/2007 2:54:13 PM
Your B & W is superb and awsome both in composition and expression.
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| Photo By: Leo Régnier Я£
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
6/16/2007 2:50:47 PM
I like kids natural smiles with very nice tone. Bravo!!!
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| Photo By: Kamreb .A.
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
3/2/2006 2:14:36 AM
thanks for your comments on my pictures. Each portrait you took is very carefully controlled - exposure, composition and model posing... what if trying different lighting angles and trying to have more communication with model. It is only my personal opinion. Just suggestion. thanks for sharing yuor photos.
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| Photo By: leo tutino
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
2/8/2006 7:55:56 AM
Good expression captured. Good b & W layers.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
2/8/2006 7:51:43 AM
Fantastic shot of children in their natural posing. I could feel the interaction betweein you and them in this picture. which is so delicate toughing moment you seized. I like B & W tone which is ofter superior as well serious than color one. Looks classic and historic. Thanks for your comments to my picture and significant suggestions. I will try. Thank you, James.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
1/9/2006 10:25:01 PM
Beautiful shot, Darja. Love the natual colour and clouds. 3 layers are great in its perspective: far away sky, the sea in the middle with man and sands as foreground.
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| Photo By: Darja Stanke
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
10/10/2005 1:27:33 AM
W.D.W.: Thanks for your comment.
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/30/2005 1:10:29 PM
LIke the silky quality of film very much. good idea of reflextion. well done.
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| Photo By: Tracey MacLeod
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/30/2005 1:08:47 PM
Use DX lens on F100? Any side effect and is it cropped image I wonder. Thanks for your comment and kind regards.
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| Photo By: Tracey MacLeod
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/30/2005 5:37:00 AM
Just gorgeos shot though a little ghost light could be found down right coner. Nice model with floating scarf. Well done.
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| Photo By: JASON LEE PARRY
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/28/2005 1:15:25 AM
Celestial feeling. Well done.
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| Photo By: Antonino De Rosa
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 1:39:21 PM
good taste of B&W with common DC. More important is the head behind the lens as the saying goes.
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| Photo By: Bulent Ozturk
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 5:07:29 AM
Classic
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 5:00:58 AM
emotional picture. Excelent shot.
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| Photo By: Ireland Hoang
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 4:00:25 AM
Fatastic shot.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 3:58:24 AM
Still hut with rolling clouds. Excelent shot and I like your detailed description. You are lucky to bump into such sunny day.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/27/2005 3:54:58 AM
Hi,James. You have been there! So familiar scenes to me. Good composition and very nice control of exposure from dark to lightness of white wall.
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| Photo By: * James *
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/4/2005 6:47:10 PM
Thanks for your comments. Nice to see familiar scenes from my hometown and know you here on web who is from Shanghai. Regards, Hu
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/4/2005 6:43:11 PM
Thank you all for your kind comments and encouragement.
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| Photo By: fan hu
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Critique By:
fan hu (K:333)
9/4/2005 6:36:34 PM
Fantastic both in perspective and color tone. I wonder how you creat this gorgeos toning. Secondly, Shanghai is my hometown though I am working in Guangzhou for a long time. I like to see small alley hometown. Thank you for your comments. Regards, Hu
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