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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
2/16/2006 11:27:43 AM
John,
Long time.... I've been stationed in Beijing, China for the past 6 months... and pictures like these make me long for the Jersey Shore. You have a great eye my friend! Luckily, I will be coming home soon so I can return to my photography and other things...
--JTK
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| Photo By: John Loreaux
(K:86210)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
2/16/2006 11:22:24 AM
I think that crop would be more powerful without the base of the pillar in the left of the frame... also a little "leveling" of the image would help as, to me, it look a little off level. I'm using the pillar in the right of the frame as my guide... I find the darkness of the pillar in the top right of the frame distracting as well....
Just a thought... you know me.. I'm all about thoughts!
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| Photo By: Andy Seehusen
(K:3372)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
2/16/2006 11:18:37 AM
Andy, I think we've spoken about this image in person... and perhaps we will again.... I think it's a great work. Both images are great, but I'd be interested to see what would happen if you crop it so that the person ends up toward the lower left part of the image... jolt it a little bit to see what it looks like... perhaps I'll play in PS a little later. 
Hope you are well, my friend! Perhaps we'll hook up in Shanghai!
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| Photo By: Andy Seehusen
(K:3372)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
10/1/2005 9:45:45 AM
Andy, good to see you posting. I love the contrast of this shot with the boy and the stone... but would LOVE to see a BW version of it. Also, I think the composition is good, but as you know, I like to slide my primary subject out of the center of the frame... just a thought or two.
Oh.. and welcome to usefilm!
--JTK
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| Photo By: Andy Seehusen
(K:3372)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
10/5/2004 4:53:53 AM
lovely area... I do enjoy that part of our country.
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| Photo By: margret albano
(K:22)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/30/2004 1:30:22 PM
Wow.. you're images really get me thinking.... amazing!
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| Photo By: Kim kyungsang
(K:14135)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/30/2004 1:28:25 PM
Love this light! ... excellent!
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| Photo By: Dagmara Domagala
(K:0)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/30/2004 1:23:53 PM
nice image.. but I think the trees are a little blown out. A neutral density graduated filter would have been great here! but, excellent idea!
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| Photo By: Nicole Marcisz
(K:10268)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/30/2004 1:22:55 PM
Love the color! Nice framing, especially in the foreground!
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| Photo By: Edward Thomas
(K:286)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 1:34:58 PM
beautiful model and a great pose. Nice work..
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| Photo By: Gertrud Gozner
(K:14222)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 1:33:20 PM
excellent framing and composition.
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| Photo By: Ian Sharp
(K:1762)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 4:09:01 AM
nice shot.. looks like you got a nice day in the Bay... been there... would love to go back and really photograph the place. Sometime...
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| Photo By: Dizzy De Silva
(K:212)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 4:06:21 AM
very inventive! Gotta love spotting images like that. What gave you the idea?
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| Photo By: Al Calkins
(K:1287)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 4:04:15 AM
nice overall image here. You've captured the "feeling" quite well. Love the light!
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| Photo By: Brandon Hoover
(K:30)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 4:03:44 AM
stunning model!
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| Photo By: larry white
(K:368)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 4:02:26 AM
wow.. great tones here! Fantastic!
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| Photo By: Craig Hanson
(K:7836)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 3:58:06 AM
great image, John... love the detail and the color!
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| Photo By: John Loreaux
(K:86210)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/29/2004 1:59:14 AM
brilliant is right.. excellent work!
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| Photo By: Jesper Kristensen
(K:786)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/28/2004 11:44:49 PM
great image! I would love to see it in BW...
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| Photo By: metin gulcan
(K:9)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/28/2004 8:44:01 PM
very pensive shot.. excellent light! Great mood on the model.
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| Photo By: Marta Glinska
(K:89)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/28/2004 8:42:05 PM
Love it! Excellent composition and focus.
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| Photo By: Wojciech Wandzel
(K:500)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/28/2004 8:36:43 PM
excellent capture here... wonderful spacing.. mood... and overall composition! Bravo!
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| Photo By: Roberto Carli
(K:13689)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/26/2004 1:07:38 PM
great image here.... excellent color and tones.
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| Photo By: Vlad Z
(K:448)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/26/2004 1:04:07 PM
nice capture.. love the monotone. (no problem with the leg either! )
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| Photo By: Jeff Fiore
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/25/2004 1:23:18 PM
Yanno, John it's getting so I can recognize your images before "seeing" them... which means you're developing a style... that's awesoming. I love this picture. The framing is great... and the pose is awesome.
To get a little picky I might have tried to take this picture from a lower angle. Now, this might not be possible due to background or where you were to take this picture, but a lower aspect might allow the viewer to connect more to the child.
Just a thought.
--JTK
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| Photo By: John Loreaux
(K:86210)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/25/2004 5:25:04 AM
I'm all about mood.. and the lighting here is awesome... gives the model a certain mood... combined with her face... excellent!
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| Photo By: jennifer armstrong
(K:6688)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/25/2004 5:24:12 AM
Wow, Kim, you certainly have a knack for captureing the moment! Excellent capture!
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| Photo By: Kim kyungsang
(K:14135)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/25/2004 5:23:19 AM
Nice image.. I think this image would be stronger with more trees... or something to offset the boathouse.
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| Photo By: Steve Rosenbach
(K:8338)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/23/2004 10:00:53 PM
Excellent sharpness... Nice capture!
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| Photo By: Bob Botts
(K:414)
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Critique By:
JT Koffenberger (K:686)
9/23/2004 9:40:41 PM
great body of work! 'nothing more to say!
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Photo By: KEVIN TEMPLE
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