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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
11/5/2004 3:34:14 AM
my wife was in a car accident and has damage to her left eye. she prefers to be photographed in the same way. see her in my images.
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Photo By: Jonathan Charles
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/27/2004 1:45:14 AM
i love your work. l love that it's film.
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| Photo By: Blazej Lindner
(K:3221)
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/25/2004 2:25:58 AM
boris, i like this image very much. i am not bothered by the inconsistantcies of tone. i love the "look at this" quality of the photograph. good eye, good job. by the way, i live in dc, too. dennis
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| Photo By: Boris Korol
(K:19)
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/13/2004 2:56:28 AM
blazeg,
absolutely gorgeous image. great framing. great composition. great clouds. got to try that red filter.
dennis
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| Photo By: Blazej Lindner
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/13/2004 2:47:36 AM
sofia,
i think hcb would have been proud to have made this photograph. great work.
thanks, dennis
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| Photo By: Sofia Quintas
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/13/2004 2:40:52 AM
luciana,
thank you for the comments. and, no, i did not receive your reply re: the holga wedding photo. sup?
dennis
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| Photo By: dennis ward
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/9/2004 3:10:15 PM
emily,
very nice image. i'm a little confused re: dof, which you may have intended. i love the perspective. good eye.
dennis
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| Photo By: emily savva
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/9/2004 4:27:10 AM
i love the concept. i love the composition. all good.
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| Photo By: Lida Chaulet
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/8/2004 10:48:12 PM
bea,
i love your work. this is fantastic. i envy your ability to connect with your subjects. this is truly outstanding.
dennis
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| Photo By: Bea Friedli
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/8/2004 8:38:54 PM
marie,
like the other portrait, this seems a bit hot. on the other hand, the hightlights in her hair almost make her jump off the page. what to do? very nice.
dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/8/2004 8:36:40 PM
marie,
just learning? too bad! very nice image. i want to say that the left hand subject is a little hot, but i can't decide. i like the highlight. the framing and composition are great.
dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/8/2004 8:32:35 PM
elfi,
absolutely beautiful image. love it
dennis
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| Photo By: elfi kaut
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/8/2004 6:07:47 PM
ogy,
beautiful portrait. great range. great composition. nicely done. dennis
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| Photo By: Ogy Ego
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/7/2004 10:43:13 PM
bea
totally gorgeous...
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| Photo By: Bea Friedli
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/5/2004 4:02:36 AM
aira...
yep, you got me. and if gwb is re-appointed in november, italy will be my new home. dennis
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| Photo By: dennis ward
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 10:23:01 PM
marie, i totally agree. perfect example of why less dof works well most of the time in this type of photograph. good thinking. dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 5:35:47 PM
ewa, beautiful photograph! the tonal values are great. the composition is wonderful. very nice dof. great job. dennis
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| Photo By: Ewa Brzozowska
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 5:30:24 PM
i can't imagine how you could have "messed up" such an isolated part of the negative. he's just a two-tone kind of guy. dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 1:41:39 AM
this is a beautiful image. i love the composition. i love the tonal values. the range. very, very nice. and i love the way the subject engages the camera. wonderful. dennis
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| Photo By: J Dillon
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 1:19:21 AM
aira, wow, first color print? i don't have the vocabulary for color prints, being a b & w kind of guy, but this is great. is this a straight print? if so, fantastic. love it. dennis
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| Photo By: Aira Manna
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 1:15:37 AM
marie, this is really a sweet photograph. i love the dof. i love the composition. i love the boy's shoes. dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 1:13:26 AM
see my portfolio, "untitled_21." in color because it is a slide. no post-camera manipulation. dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/4/2004 1:03:02 AM
raquel, thank you for your comment. did you notice my son's face just to the right of the very blurry image? i thought that was pretty clear. it's all one image. taken at once, without later manipulation. guess it doesn't work. thanks again, dennis
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| Photo By: dennis ward
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/2/2004 3:20:24 PM
dennis, isn't it wonderful how the people who run this world create such fine urban vistas? nice image. did you perhaps do a version with greater dof? just curious. dennis
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| Photo By: Dennis Polessky
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/2/2004 3:39:03 AM
bea, very nice. absolute 7. love the composition, the tonal values, the dof. nice again, dennis
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| Photo By: Bea Friedli
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/2/2004 3:35:41 AM
this is a nice image. i'm an old tri-x fan and am impressed with this being a night photograph. it has good tonal range and movement. you might be interested in my color version of our flag. i wanted to express some of its more aggressive characteristics and used camera movement. what do you think? dennis
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| Photo By: Mary Therese Marie's Photos
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
8/2/2004 3:29:31 AM
bea, thank you for the "original." i guess i'm just too old school, but i like the un-manipulated, film version the best. nice tonal values can occur in ranges of gray. still, nice either way. thank you for the comment on my portrait. she may be thinking that her left eye was damaged in a disabling car accident, and she wanted a portrait that hid that fact. she is a very interesting lady and i would love to do her justice. dennis
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| Photo By: dennis ward
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
7/31/2004 4:56:48 PM
dennis, this is a nice image - kind of walker evans-ish. my only concern with it is that the highlights seem a little hot and the darker values, especially his shoes, have lost detail. high contrast. i wonder if a short "flash" would help pull the tones together. anyway, nice image, nice portfolio. dennis
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| Photo By: Dennis Couvillion
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
7/27/2004 5:18:54 PM
this image is gorgeous. the composition, the tonality, the values, the dof, the subject's engagement with the lens. very, very nice.
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| Photo By: marmur-Marek Urbanski
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Critique By:
dennis ward (K:431)
7/27/2004 3:58:07 PM
this is a beautiful image. i like the composition, the crop, the range of tones, the dof, and the way the subject engages with the camera. a kind of soft defiance. my only criticism would be that, without a neck, her head seems to float unattached, almost like a mask. still, very nice concept and very good execution.
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| Photo By: Pawel Chrzanowski
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