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Critique By:
Maria Laet (K:196)
5/29/2004 2:18:15 AM
you created a ood composition
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Critique By:
Danny Brannigan (K:19523)
5/7/2004 10:43:00 PM
I think I might crop it to show just the two young lads and emphasize the victory.
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Critique By:
Antonio silva (K:39)
5/6/2004 6:32:26 PM
vERY WELL SEE
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Critique By:
Anita W (K:920)
5/1/2004 12:39:12 AM
Very nicely done.
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Critique By:
Jim Loy (K:31333)
4/30/2004 1:46:23 AM
That is just mean...kekeke--lolololol...yeah...and life goes on...
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Critique By:
Anne Bogardus (K:2875)
4/26/2004 1:57:05 AM
I like the touch of bright color from the bouquet in her hand. Adds a nice spot in contrast to the other, more subdued colors.
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Critique By:
Seongsoo Nam (K:493)
4/25/2004 3:10:14 PM
nice capture..., Mark
regards, Seongsoo
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
4/25/2004 11:29:20 AM
Good macro, delicate colour
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Critique By:
Azadeh Assaran (K:18)
4/24/2004 8:10:15 PM
Is she really going to paradise Mark? LOL
Its actually a smart shot and has good compostion.
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Critique By:
Deb Mayes (K:19605)
4/23/2004 1:21:05 AM
I'll spare you my rant against ratings; someone was unduly harsh.
You have to grab these shots when you get the chance, and sometimes conditions are less than ideal. I love the way the boys are studying the awards here; I can feel their intensity. I also like the limited depth of field; it sets the boys off from the figures in the back.
The only suggestions I can offer to improve this particular photo would be to crop the dead space from the right side and adjust the levels a bit. Cropping is subjective; you can judge for yourself whether I've helped or hurt. 
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Critique By:
KURT CHAMBERLIN (K:1598)
4/22/2004 6:06:58 AM
very nice...very, very nice
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Critique By:
gheorghe(rec) florucza (K:1099)
4/18/2004 8:08:10 PM
nice shot, but nothing more (it's only my think)
rec
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Critique By:
Gabriella Carta (K:22879)
4/17/2004 10:31:56 PM
wonderful macro, good. Regards by Gabry
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Critique By:
Ivan Møllebjerg (K:6079)
4/17/2004 7:11:17 AM
There is a nice story in this picture, but it need a little light I think
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Critique By:
Raoul Endres (K:2676)
4/17/2004 1:25:57 AM
Like the shadows and DoF
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Critique By:
Antonella Nistri (K:21867)
4/16/2004 11:13:08 PM
This photo is very beautiful. IMO it lacks some light and could be improved by working on the levels. Great composition,congrats,Antonella
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Critique By:
Ferran Lacruz (K:5466)
4/14/2004 8:37:41 PM
Beautiful portrait .Saludos Ferran
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Critique By:
Anka Nuo (K:18)
4/10/2004 1:44:57 PM
very nice and beautifull foto
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Critique By:
waldemar ebner filho (K:5242)
4/10/2004 12:05:11 PM
Mark,
Very good.Hug
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Critique By:
Riny Koopman (K:19998)
4/10/2004 11:43:10 AM
lovely composition and beautiful spring tree!
well done,
riny
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Critique By:
Daniel Guerin (K:7961)
4/9/2004 12:04:40 PM
I like the unusually narrow panoramic shape. You've done a good stitching job but it does notice very slightly a third in from either side. Still, it's original and a nice scene, well done.
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Critique By:
Ron Beezley (K:2834)
4/9/2004 11:06:50 AM
Great shot okie... like the blurred background.
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Critique By:
Mark Layne (K:253)
4/9/2004 10:57:55 AM
Thanks for the suggestion. I cropped the photo a little for this posting. I will consider redoing again at a later time. The image further to the left was kind of uneventful but towards the right could supply some additional scenic value.
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Critique By:
Debarshi Duttagupta (K:26815)
4/9/2004 10:51:37 AM
Excellent colours. I would have loved to see the subject a lettle more to the left or right following the rule of the thirds. Great shot anyways. Congratulations.
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Critique By:
mario mario c (K:5347)
4/9/2004 10:32:53 AM
beautiful!
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Critique By:
Stephen Bowden (K:64141)
4/9/2004 9:43:44 AM
Superb macro Mark - colour, detail and dof are all excellent
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Critique By:
Gregory Roth (K:868)
4/9/2004 9:27:48 AM
Beautiful scene, Mark.
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Critique By:
Reda Danaf (K:14309)
4/8/2004 5:11:35 AM
Superb composition and colours, nice shooting angle.
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Critique By:
Mark Layne (K:253)
4/7/2004 8:16:34 PM
Thanks Debra. I thought about that after posting and seeing it next to the other photos in my profile. I like the results of your crop.
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Critique By:
Enjoy (K:16125)
4/7/2004 7:28:42 PM
I bet if you had cropped this tighter...it would look more outstanding..I am just a beginner myself but just a suggestion ok...its lovely non the less and I hope you don't mind me making suggestion.
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