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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
1/13/2005 10:49:48 PM
Great amount of drama in this shot. The wind, the sky, and the stance of the person clearly indicate that...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
1/1/2005 1:18:58 PM
Excellent work Hugo, I really like the reflections. The composition is great, as wells as the colors.
Happy new year!
- Thamer
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
11/24/2004 8:11:08 AM
Great photo Ahmed. But I think it needs a bit of improvements, I attached the improved version here. Here is what I did:
- Straighten
- Crop
- Sharpen
- Contrast
- Dodging
I hope this helps  I hope you're enjoying your vacation!
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| Photo By: Ahmed J
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
11/23/2004 11:51:23 PM
Beautiful! I like the soothing colors and motion in the water. The composition is great.
I used to live in Jeddah when I was young, but then moved to Riyadh. I'm now in Tampa, FL to get a degree.
I hope to see some more photos like this one You can view my photos here if you like:
http://www.pbase.com/tyt2000
Keep up the good work!
- Thamer (tyt2000@hotmail.com)
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| Photo By: arwa abdullah
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
10/20/2004 1:07:45 AM
Great exposure and composition...
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| Photo By: Ahmed J
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
10/10/2004 2:32:16 AM
I think its an excellent macro, I love the colors in the BG...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
10/3/2004 6:06:21 AM
I really like the light here, great expression you've captured.
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
10/3/2004 6:04:28 AM
Hi Hugo,
Great expression you've captured, it looks good in B&W. I'm not sure about the soft focus, was it intended? Although soft focus works in some cases, I don't see it working here, but thats just me
Cheers...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
9/21/2004 12:10:10 AM
Hi Hugo,
I'm fine thanks, how about you?
I actually rotated it in PS. The main subject here is the minaret, not the bricks/road. So it didn't make sense to me to have the minaret upside-down, you know what I mean?
Thanks for the comment...
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| Photo By: Thamer Al-Tassan
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
9/20/2004 2:21:35 AM
PS work included B&W conversion, Levels adjustment and Burning. Nothing was added to the photo.
Thanks for the comment...
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| Photo By: Thamer Al-Tassan
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
9/19/2004 8:27:09 AM
Lovely scene, I really like the tones and color. Nice use of leading lines and reflections. I would have straightened it a little.
Thanks for the comment, I really appriciate it
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| Photo By: Rebecca Raybon
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
9/19/2004 8:24:50 AM
Lovely contrasting colors. Very nice abstract quality to it. I wonder, how did it look rotated the other way around (so it wouldn't look like an obvious reflection)?
Thanks for the comment and fav! I really appriciate it...
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| Photo By: Kym Skiles
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
9/18/2004 11:34:08 PM
I like the tonal range here. The blurryness fits the mood of the photo really well and emphasizes the motion. If this was my photo, I would have cropped it from the right and left some space on the left, as i'm not a big fan of centered compositions, but they do work for me sometimes, depending on the photo.
Very nice work, and thanks for the comment...
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| Photo By: Aira Manna
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/9/2004 3:36:25 PM
Hi Hugo,
I'm very busy these days with college, thats why i'm not active at the moment. But I stopped by to comment on this beautiful image while waiting for the instructor to start his computer. I really like the perspective, it shows the light spots as leading lines to the end of the souq. The curvature of the spot patters is really eye pleasing, I like how you captured that.
By the way, "Turn to Clear Vision" and "Between Red and Yellow" were displayed at my university's art gallery
Take care...
- Thamer
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:33:07 PM
Electrical colors and interesting formation. I see red blood cells, what do you see?
Well done...
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:29:55 PM
Really interesting and weird formations, it looks like a brain. Nice color...
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:28:15 PM
I really like the warm colors and how the light is formed on the wall.
Creative work, well done...
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| Photo By: Jani Salvataggio
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:25:46 PM
Beautiful, I like the composition, off-centering the musician and showing the crowd.
Very well done...
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| Photo By: luisa vassallo
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:24:09 PM
Wonderful detail on the central part and water drops. Beautiful colors and DOF too. I like the centered composition, it would also look good if it was off centered.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Alan Orr
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:22:13 PM
Nice candid capture, I like the detail and composition. B&W works really well with it.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Gregory Fiedler
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:15:37 PM
Nice looking abstract and reflection. I like the treatment you gave it, in an abstract way. How did the original photo look?
In your words: But there is no special statement in the photo, which make the picture interesting. Even if the photo is abstract, it must have a statement, in order to remain exciting.
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| Photo By: Stefan A. F. Kassler
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/4/2004 2:11:36 PM
Great detail showing the texture. I really like the DOF.
Well done, keep it up...
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Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/3/2004 9:00:11 PM
Beautiful composition, I like the centered placement of the rose on the book. Great use of exposure to illuminate the book. Did you try a red light? I think its tightly cropped from the top, maybe leaving some space at the top would have balanced the photo.
Well done, keep it up...
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| Photo By: Ghada Noman
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/3/2004 7:41:20 PM
To me, the lighting and shadow are perfect. I like the tilt very much. The shallow DOF works well here, how does it look without any DOF? My only suggestion is to use a different background, like a fabric with some color and shine to it.
I would expect to see this in a magazine advertisement.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Ahmed J
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
4/1/2004 1:46:25 PM
Hi Hugo,
Great composition, I like the random placement of the CDs. I also like the tilt as it makes the photo more dynamic. Great lighting too, makes the glass stand out.
This is what I would have done:
- Put a black background, because there is a distracting element there, I think its a portion of the monitor?
- Use a glass that has no distracting decorations, or use a mug.
- Add a bottle to the composition.
Take care...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
3/31/2004 2:56:43 PM
I like this one better because the emphasis is on the light post. I like how its light is bringing it out of the darkness.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
3/31/2004 2:53:33 PM
Great composition, very solid. Nice perspective too showing the repetitive pattern.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
3/31/2004 2:52:11 PM
Nice color and detail, great DOF too.
Keep it up...
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| Photo By: Jani Salvataggio
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
3/31/2004 2:50:54 PM
I like the close-up and centered composition, it serves to show a lot of detail.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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Critique By:
Thamer Al-Tassan (K:1358)
3/31/2004 2:49:45 PM
Great composition. Very detailed, showing the texture of the house.
Well done...
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| Photo By: Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
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