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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/30/2005 7:21:30 PM
Thanks Trish, I really love your work.
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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/30/2005 7:19:51 PM
THanks Armando and God bless you as well.
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
6/30/2005 6:42:00 PM
beautiful.
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
6/30/2005 6:33:51 PM
what a soft looking delicate portrait. beautiful girls.
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ARMANDO ALCÁZAR (K:42404)
6/30/2005 6:28:14 PM
wonderful double portrait of your beutiful angels my dear friend, Congrats and God bless you 
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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/30/2005 5:44:51 PM
Thank you for your comment Roby.
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
6/30/2005 4:34:11 PM
sweet and lovely..
well done
roby
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
6/30/2005 4:26:15 PM
oh elizabeth,
is so equal...
so wonderful!
a magnific and magic light very well done!
cheers
roby
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Critique By:
Lisa Speck (K:340)
6/30/2005 2:26:30 AM
this is great. I love the colors and the fact that the child's feet are visible!
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Critique By:
Stephen Bowden (K:64141)
6/29/2005 4:59:07 PM
Fabulous macro Elizabeth and the toning is super. I am surprised there are not any more comments ?
Photograph is superb !!
Steve
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Critique By:
Jan . (K:8693)
6/29/2005 1:07:20 PM
Ya know, I really love to hear that, Elizabeth...sure all the "great shot" comments make you feel good (to a degree) but I'm always hungry, myself, for the more meat-and-potatoes comments, either explaining what I did wrong or what I did right! That's why I'm here, too...to learn...glad to know I might be able to offer another opinion to you, without the fear of stepping on toes...wish more people were like that.
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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/29/2005 12:33:03 PM
Thanks for your comment Jan. It's a beautiful little park and hopefully we'll revisit this spot and try a different composition. Lots of obstacles around this little swing because it sits inside a gazeebo. I have more that I'll probably be posting during the week from this shoot. Please keep commenting - I learn more from the mistakes.
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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/29/2005 12:26:21 PM
Thanks for the comments David. Strange how you just don't notice some things until either much later, or someone points it out.Which is what makes usefilm so great. I think my reasoning for her position was to avoid a white post (still a little visible) just to the right of her head - however, I think the composition as it stands needs improvement. I'll keep shootin'
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Critique By:
Wayne Harridge (K:18292)
6/29/2005 11:17:54 AM
This one is better.
Background is less distracting.
...Wayne
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Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
6/29/2005 6:05:11 AM
The dark tone with the bright shirt is so attractive on this. Love the colors and how the white headband and outfit leads the eye so well.
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Jan . (K:8693)
6/29/2005 2:47:37 AM
IMHO everything about this one is better, Elizabeth, except her skin tones...they were a little warmer in the other.
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Jan . (K:8693)
6/29/2005 2:46:11 AM
I agree with David about the framing of this one...but I think the other is stronger basically because she is not competing so much with the flowers for your attention.
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Critique By:
David Hofmann (K:22223)
6/28/2005 11:20:05 PM
I just went back to the two portraits. I think what makes this one less attractive is the framing. The face is basically in the lower part of the frame and horizontally centered.
I think it would be more interesting if her head was more in the upper right side and the camera a little lower so the background would be all flowers and green without the concret. Not trying to be negative, just some ideas.
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Critique By:
Elizabeth O'Neal (K:4436)
6/28/2005 8:50:37 PM
Thanks David, I noticed after posting that this one is desaturated a little more than the other one as well.
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Critique By:
David Hofmann (K:22223)
6/28/2005 8:18:31 PM
this one is my favorite of the two. I like her expression here.
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Critique By:
ARMANDO ALCÁZAR (K:42404)
6/28/2005 7:04:25 PM
woww!! elizabeth I have seen both pictures and your girl every time it is bigger and more beautiful, I believe that it is hour that you buy the shotgun to frighten the pretenders, hahahaha!!!
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Critique By:
boubekeur boukerma (K:2623)
6/27/2005 7:10:28 PM
effective macro view.
No need for special crop effect as it is aleady a strong shot.
Take care
Boubékeur
Paris
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Critique By:
Gabriella Carta (K:22879)
6/27/2005 10:19:38 AM
wonderful macro and colors, very very good!!
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Critique By:
Stephen Bowden (K:64141)
6/26/2005 2:17:37 PM
I can see the one that is missing from my shirt amongst them ;-)
Great idea for a still life and lovely colours too :-)
Best wishes,
Steve
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
6/25/2005 6:39:20 AM
wow. what a fantastic landscape shot. the colors are awesome. and I love the lines in the sky. great shot.
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Critique By:
luisa vassallo (K:28230)
6/25/2005 6:13:19 AM
good macro
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Critique By:
ahmed saied (K:8734)
6/25/2005 4:18:06 AM
Very clear and sharp , well done .
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ian pearson (K:1736)
6/25/2005 4:03:20 AM
Hi 'Liz, typical postcard shot, (compliment intended). Only the very best make it here.I just love the range of colours and to achieve it shooting into the sun is quite awesome, fools most light meters to dumping out the subtle colour tones.The shadowed palms and foreground really make the composition and give it atmosphere.Timing is vital here. A few seconds later and the whole colour range just slides away.Really well done.I think it deserves a 7.
Ian Pearson.
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Robert Jones (K:1692)
6/25/2005 1:24:48 AM
Beautiful. I really like the highlighted horizontal lines in contrast to the dark lines of the Palm trees. Nice color with this composition, well done.
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ARMANDO ALCÁZAR (K:42404)
6/24/2005 10:58:28 PM
7+++++++++++++++ , simply wonderful, congrats and God bless you my friend
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