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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
8/22/2004 3:53:47 AM
This image captured my eye. You really have caught the feeling of movement very well.
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| Photo By: Stephen R. Pellerine
(K:2370)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
8/22/2004 3:30:43 AM
Great colours. Nice image.
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| Photo By: Romulo Lubachesky
(K:11836)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
8/22/2004 3:27:52 AM
I really like the impact infrared adds to this scene. Great work.
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| Photo By: John E Robertson
(K:1752)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
8/22/2004 3:24:39 AM
A nice photo of a cute kid. I like the skin tones a lot.
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| Photo By: Ning Fandango
(K:1277)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
8/22/2004 3:22:33 AM
Very effective colours and a powerful image. Nice.
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| Photo By: tess campbell
(K:515)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/16/2003 6:51:07 PM
Obviously staged but well done. Funny and just a touch erotic. Nice.
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| Photo By: Verna Absolutestockphoto
(K:2836)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/16/2003 12:15:59 AM
I've seen your angled version of this shot at DPC. I think that this works better. Good work.
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| Photo By: John Lambiase
(K:549)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/15/2003 9:37:14 PM
You've got nice colours, a good use of dof, excellent composition, overall a good photograph. The problem here is the title. It makes me want to see expressions on the kid's faces. I want to see them enjoying their play.
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| Photo By: Rafal K. Komierowski
(K:6441)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/15/2003 7:22:54 PM
This is a great photograph. But the text spoils it. Too much text and the textual aligning is weak. Show me the original photo, and I'll be very happy.
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| Photo By: Chang Hong
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/12/2003 7:57:41 PM
Mark, your explanations really help the viewer get inside your photographs. Without them, we'd have to rely purely on the visual information. Here, visually, you've captured a well-known scene very well. Maybe having the highest mountain peak just behind the gate is a touch distracting, though. The colour choice is very effective. With the explanation, however, the story becomes much deeper: the red takes on an altogether stronger meaning, of Japanese blood split. Wonderful stuff.
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Photo By: Mark Julian
(K:36866)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/12/2003 7:45:17 PM
Intelligent idea for a perceptive social comment. Your base idea disparages the use of women in this way. But do you feel that there really could be any other way. And what about women themselves, do they play any part in their own objectification? Great photo, by the way.
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| Photo By: Mark Julian
(K:36866)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/12/2003 6:50:53 PM
Lovely sunset, captured very well. The addition of the log adds a nice touch of perspective.
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| Photo By: Steven B. Poitinger
(K:1757)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/12/2003 1:42:51 AM
A nice postcard shot.
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| Photo By: Peter Kornakov
(K:56)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/11/2003 11:06:06 PM
Of all your shots, Gilo, I like this one the best. It's simple, but very effective. The composition and colours are very clear. The model's cute, too.
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| Photo By: Gilo De Gili
(K:816)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/11/2003 9:32:12 PM
Nice effect.
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| Photo By: Al Ferreira
(K:14)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/11/2003 9:23:16 PM
You have a pretty model and a great setting. Overall, the shot is done well, but I have a few comments. 1) Why is the head positioned below the water line? It makes her look cramped, rather than free. 2) The grain is a bit too strong. 3) You've cut off her feet. Body cropping can be done, but there has to be a reason. I can't see that here.
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| Photo By: Michael W.
(K:842)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/11/2003 12:27:06 AM
Wow! The composition, the title, the colours - very, very suggestive. You've brought the petal into the world of the erotic. I like this.
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| Photo By: Ula Pieñkowska
(K:884)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/9/2003 9:30:34 PM
Very nice symbolism here! I really like the low sun on the wood, suggesting the end of the day, the end of a life. The sun is warm, glowing, a nice tribute to a tree. The tree's life wasn't a disaster - like the sun retreating for the day, it naturally came to an end. Good composition.
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| Photo By: Greg McCracken
(K:129)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/9/2003 9:24:34 PM
Great shot. Very good 'seeing'.
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Jim Smiley (K:280)
9/9/2003 8:39:58 PM
The grain really works well here. And a very cute model.
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| Photo By: Greg Smereczynski
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