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Critique By:
Alberto Pfeifer (K:617)
11/13/2004 7:02:38 PM
Jon, I just like the original one! Go back to it!
It makes me think of the model being illuminated by a wood fireplace crackling up...I don't think it's too "thick".
It stands out nicely from the dark background...btw, is she Monica or Angelina J. ?
Cheers, she did look gorgeous straight from the thumbnail!
Alberto
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Critique By:
Lukasz Kuczkowski (K:14687)
11/13/2004 6:38:44 PM
b&w is perfect;
well done, good portrait
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 6:18:22 PM
Thank you
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 6:18:06 PM
Thanks
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 6:17:50 PM
Thanks
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 6:13:58 PM
Thanks John
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Critique By:
John Azzopardi (K:1833)
11/13/2004 6:04:04 PM
Yes I agree ,Best in B&W.
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 6:01:04 PM
Probably best in B&W then?
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Critique By:
John Azzopardi (K:1833)
11/13/2004 5:56:41 PM
I assume she is about 24 yrs. the second shot seems greenish. Well the orange side was better, try to make it lighter or slightly to the brown.
I would appreciate if you can comment on any of mine. Negative comments are welcome, I still needs to learn more.
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 5:46:57 PM
Do you think that this is a better Tone?
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 5:44:28 PM
I know I think I might change it to sepia... the client think's it makes her look too old what age would you say she is?
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Critique By:
John Azzopardi (K:1833)
11/13/2004 5:42:09 PM
The orange tone seems to be a bit strong.But now reading your comments says its not sepia.
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 5:39:02 PM
It was actually not sepia it was almost orange on my screen... thanks Jon
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Critique By:
CAGATAY ATASAGUN (K:21564)
11/13/2004 5:36:44 PM
Dear Jon,
Very nice face portrait with sepia colors, COngratulations!
Cagatay
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 5:34:30 PM
What do you mean by far better,could you explain?
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
11/13/2004 5:32:36 PM
Exelente retrato...
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Jon Pankhurst (K:577)
11/13/2004 5:32:15 PM
What do you mean by far better,could you explain?
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Critique By:
John Azzopardi (K:1833)
11/13/2004 5:29:26 PM
The model is fantastic, the tone... in my opinion could be by far better.
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Critique By:
Ameed El-Ghoul (K:42215)
11/13/2004 2:00:15 AM
Simply perfect Jon, i like the lighting, the black background, the pose, the look, and you added the magical final touches with your creative frame, very well done indeed, regards,
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Critique By:
Kiarang Alaei (K:49415)
11/12/2004 3:51:49 PM
Nice shot and good & creative done in framing.
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Critique By:
Michele Berti (K:14921)
11/12/2004 3:24:27 PM
that's really pretty
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Critique By:
Adnan Qureshi (K:498)
11/12/2004 1:35:32 PM
Simply superb
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Critique By:
Rocco T (K:4130)
11/10/2004 9:38:14 PM
Intense and well realized!
Regards.
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Critique By:
- - (K:2309)
11/10/2004 9:13:23 PM
This is beautiful 'The intimate portrait'. Light is very good. Model is very beauty... 7+
Regards,
Misa Niciner
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Critique By:
waldemar ebner filho (K:5242)
11/10/2004 8:31:15 PM
Jon,
Excellent, both girl(beautifull)and work. Hug
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Critique By:
Osman Cem GENCTURK (K:1446)
11/10/2004 7:23:43 PM
Nice face but so beautiful lighting! Very attractive frame. Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Karen Ferranti (K:2959)
10/24/2004 4:35:07 AM
Wonderful Portrait! What a beautiful Girl.
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Critique By:
Brian Rueger (K:7341)
10/24/2004 1:32:27 AM
Grea shot. The softness is nice. Great camera too!!!!
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Critique By:
Keith Naylor (K:13064)
10/23/2004 7:17:45 PM
Beautiful soft tones and such a flirtatious expression. Great work.
K
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Critique By:
RC. Dany (K:64104)
10/23/2004 2:51:23 PM
Excellent
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