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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 1:00:09 PM
twin cities - I like the darkness - not sure about the texture...
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| Photo By: Tim Long
(K:9228)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 12:35:27 PM
can't decide if the layers make her look consumed or broken...but I do know that I like the left hand side and how it fades out...not only the edge but the cloudiness on that side of the frame...
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
(K:24473)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 12:21:09 PM
the brilliance of the tear, her eyes, and the lips almost hurt me...
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 12:16:31 PM
great reflection of light right where the eye would be...
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
(K:1742)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 6:02:20 AM
Jeanette,
Someday when I no longer have small children - I can step away from digital and play in dark rooms and chemicals...I envy you...
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| Photo By: Jeanette Hägglund
(K:59855)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 5:57:46 AM
Excellent angle - it was seen just right so that the head bleeds off into the building - the individual mind consumed by the corporate? There are so many possibilities in this series...
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
(K:1742)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 5:56:00 AM
I am jealous - this is what I want to accomplish with snow and never quite seem to get right - need to jot down your settings as a reference point...
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
(K:1742)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 5:52:38 AM
the glasses and the book look good but I am not sure about the camera - it doesn't seem to be hanging quite right - still this is a very funny, very pointed comment...
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| Photo By: David Antoff
(K:995)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:54:36 AM
always a decisive moment because it is an internal account...
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| Photo By: ana ribeiro
(K:21290)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:52:26 AM
wonderful reflections!! I would love to join you for a cuppa...
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:49:55 AM
love it reflection and shadows and reality all in the right places for me...
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| Photo By: waldemar ebner filho
(K:5242)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:46:56 AM
Your work is definitely stamped by you - this one feels as if he needs to be moved beyond a stone prison...
btw funny you asked about a polaroid transfer - haven't got my hands on a polaroid for doing transfers yet and this was my digital answer to the problem - printed it out on fabric transfer paper (for putting pictures on t-shirts etc) and then transferred it to some paper I made!! 
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| Photo By: Jeanette Hägglund
(K:59855)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:40:46 AM
Tim the siding almost seems over smoothed - it is not necessarily bad if you intend it - I am working on a series where I unsharpen and smooth for effect but it is noticeable and I don't know if you intended it...the cat is a wonderful vivid orange and he definitely adds a bit of a smile to the scene...
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| Photo By: Tim Long
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:34:12 AM
John,
First of all, I like the title - your nature/landscapes almost always speak of quietness and peace to me...in this image, the title is especially apt as it signifies the muffled sensation fog gives the world. Good sense of space and movement...
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| Photo By: John Chiu
(K:6250)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:34:00 AM
Tim,
I am not sure but this wetland looks frozen...I also think you live relatively near to me...get any snow last night?
I like the somewhat blank foreground and how as we move into the distance, the stumps get denser and lead us on...
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| Photo By: Tim Long
(K:9228)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:29:07 AM
Hugo,
I've been looking at this for awhile and it is a welter of detail...which given your parameters is excellent...while you may not intend art - it is well-composed and so the tree nipping into the left-hand margin of the frame is distracting because it makes us wonder what is beyond the rubble...just something to think about...
M
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/17/2004 4:27:31 AM
Tim,
I apologize for not leaving a greater comment on some of your florals yesterday - I was way behind on my friends and wanted to at least look at nearly everything...I was impressed that the effect was achieved without ps and am interested in how it was achieved because to do it without PS always seems more honest even though I will always debate the reality of a photo even if shot head on - we filter - never doubt it - how we compose an image is a filter...
anyhow...if you are interested in sharing your homemade job and how it was created let me know... 
since I have never done any IR photography, I can't say much but I do feel this lacks something that I've seen in IR that I like perhaps it is a lack of clarity and of course a great sky is always wonderful in IR...I am afraid this comment wasn't helpful either...
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| Photo By: Tim Long
(K:9228)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:43:04 PM
this is beautiful - reminds me of something Lowell would take - love the tones and lack of detail...
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| Photo By: sandy c. hopkins
(K:17107)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:41:20 PM
Pat,
this is so real it makes me ache...
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:40:41 PM
a touchable tone...
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| Photo By: David Rogers
(K:1082)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:38:12 PM
I think it is such a silly debate - it is all about what you see and how you show us - it isn't about reality - we might as will go to Aristotle and start debating...
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
(K:1742)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:33:39 PM
hello and goodbye - just saying hi...
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| Photo By: Marília Ferraz
(K:15244)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:29:50 PM
this seems more of man and less of something organic - somehow the previous two images seemed to convey a sense of the organic inspite of their source - this one however, simply seems manmade - this is not fault of yours - in the sense that they are manmade - somehow though the others spoke to me differently...I am not explaining myself well, am I?
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:15:12 PM
the strong breaks in the brick fall in the right places imo...they empahsize what is emotionally necessary...
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| Photo By: Jeanette Hägglund
(K:59855)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:09:06 PM
so the echo of form is natural?
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
(K:24473)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 2:06:20 PM
wonderful contrast in tones - sort of creamy in feel...
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Photo By: Bradley Prue
(K:30678)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 1:57:41 PM
this is where I really love your work...
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| Photo By: sandy c. hopkins
(K:17107)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 1:54:42 PM
great expression - directly under a naked bulb - the shadow under her neck seems to fit...
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| Photo By: sandy c. hopkins
(K:17107)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 1:52:14 PM
subterannean myths...
teeth - ugh...mine are too sensitive...
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| Photo By: ana ribeiro
(K:21290)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/16/2004 1:47:07 PM
yes, I am sure it was very small...did you crush any snails when you lay on your belly to take this? Did you shirt and pants get wet and muddy?
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| Photo By: Johnny K
(K:12635)
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