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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 6:58:25 PM
you know, I don't have much to say - he makes me smile and I can't focus on detail because he tickles me so - reminds me of a child of the sixties or seventies trying to peer out from behind a mop of shaggy hair!!
phwet - it lifts up and flops down again!!
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| Photo By: Tim Long
(K:9228)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 6:55:14 PM
This works well and is unusual in this genre...the sepia tones of the trees remind me of a certain style of classic landscape and the the faded orange of the automobile is very complimentary to those tones...and the dark brown rusts echoes them nicely...you were alert and remembered to tone the reflections too...this is an excellent and refreshing shot in this genre
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| Photo By: Tim Long
(K:9228)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 6:49:35 PM
A more dynamic and well-organized composition - the last one teetered on the edge of chaos but still held our attention - this one has a wonderful vertical movement...
I noticed that this one is vertical and the previous (if I remember correctly was horizontal). I find it interesting as typically tryps are displayed in the same format. For some reason, I've never noted how you handle that before. However, both scenes needed the layout they had and the strength of the image should not become subservient to the format imo...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 6:41:13 PM
I like the tones and shadows of this shot - however, I do think that it could benefit from a tad more sharpness on the left-hand side of his face (as in our left, his right)...
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| Photo By: Ursula I Abresch
(K:6515)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 12:13:38 PM
ah, the ever famous Dutch lace!!
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 12:11:32 PM
Very bright with a good comp that moves well inspite of the business...I am interested to see the next two and see how this tryp plays out...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 12:00:53 PM
great light and a wonderful sense of distortion - it sucks us down those stairs...
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| Photo By: Lukasz Gladki
(K:1101)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 11:52:41 AM
this one just makes me smile - tickles my funny bone...
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
(K:1742)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 5:09:53 AM
I like this one a great deal better - greater perspective to not have the statue be the focal point of the image...the only thing I would change is (if it were possible) I would have stepped a few steps to the right to clear him of the tree branches - leave the branches in the frame but put them behind him...
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Photo By: Bradley Prue
(K:30678)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 5:06:12 AM
classic rural landscape - good deep DOF and excellent tones - fun light and shadow interplay...
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| Photo By: Lou Dina
(K:12194)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 5:04:06 AM
I've never seen a mill like this - glad you shot it for us on the other side of the world...
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:55:31 AM
serene - lovely smooth - good shot...
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| Photo By: Carol Watson
(K:5185)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:44:11 AM
Beautiful and I like that we can't see your daughter's face - heightens the mystery regarding what they are looking at...
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:41:34 AM
fave,
there is so much that could be said about this but it is unnecessary the image says it all...
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| Photo By: Fabio Keiner
(K:81109)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:37:46 AM
Love it,,,Hugo has a point about the board on the left but otherwise this one charms me - love the light on their suction cup thingies and how they almost glow!! Great comp with a good filling of the frame without over-flowing it!! The negative space shape of the bucket compliments the square positive of the squid...
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| Photo By: Verena Rentrop
(K:15233)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:33:17 AM
does it mark the spot or is it a barrier to you?
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| Photo By: kita mcintosh
(K:18594)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:31:23 AM
I want to compliment you on getting your son to allow you to shoot him - your children are handsome indeed...
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:24:04 AM
tada!! you got big brother to join in!! I like this on wish that either the crop were tighter or that we had your daughter's hands - love the profile correspondance in this one...
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:21:46 AM
beautiful blues!! and the person to whom these belong has a fine eye for detail and composition...
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:18:56 AM
I agree with much of what you say here - I love this image as it connects with more than some of your other stuff (although, your eye is brilliant in every way - people do not always understand each other)...
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| Photo By: Jim McNitt
(K:11246)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:11:20 AM
nice clean classic shot...
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
3/1/2004 4:06:32 AM
isn't that funny - I was going to say I liked the textured version better - both strong...
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| Photo By: shelby koning
(K:5450)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 8:54:47 PM
Good comp and excellent feel - the only thing I would suggest is a slight bit more definition in the center...this image swirls beautifully...
BTW I posted the info you requested about the Amaryllis in the photo - sorry I didn't I meant to with that particular photo...
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| Photo By: Mary Sue Hayward
(K:17558)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 2:54:25 PM
how about recalling Ana - I like this one especially the texture!!
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| Photo By: ana ribeiro
(K:21290)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 2:52:07 PM
Hugo, the comp and DOF and everything about this one is perfect - I like it very, very, well!! An odd note that has little to do with the photo but more about interpretation - for some reason it looks like an old phone cord to me! Do you remember how the earpiece/mouthpiece of the phone was attached to the phone by a stretchy spiral cord? This reminds me of that!! 
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| Photo By: Hugo de Wolf
(K:185110)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 2:48:37 PM
The grain is wonderful to me but then ask me about grain - when I shoot grainy film I go all the way with it!!
The comp here is wonderful and if it were mine, I might press it slightly further and crop in a bit more from the left and bottom and drop her even more into the corner so it is about her face and the light and dark shadows beyond - right now I find her clothes a tad distracting but that would be my style!!
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
(K:24473)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 2:43:52 PM
I like this one very well - the grain and the lightness seem to lend a degree of transience to the moment that is fitting - you may not have expected it but it worked well and will probably be worth continuing with in the future...
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| Photo By: Stefan Engström
(K:24473)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 2:32:25 PM
awesome DOF and perspective, I like the detail of shadows and the lighting on the face is great - wonderful smile!!
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| Photo By: Ursula I Abresch
(K:6515)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 5:37:13 AM
and lingers, and lingers, and lingers, and lingers, and lingers, and lingers!!!
nice classic winter scene...it seems a tad soft but I always give leeway when someone is posting from a scan...nice depth and movement...
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| Photo By: John Chiu
(K:6250)
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
2/29/2004 5:24:34 AM
wonderful repetition and movement - it feels like the steps to a dance...
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| Photo By: Verena Rentrop
(K:15233)
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