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Critique By:
Paul Fisher (K:641)
4/12/2004 5:09:47 AM
Nice and sharp, and well exposed. However I feel this shot does not make the greatest possible use of the subject.
Try framing (or cropping) to a vertical format to match the upright stance of the flower.
Although the background has been thrown out of focus, there is still too much detail, and the colour is too similar to the lower part of the subject flower. To make the main subject "pop" you may need to use lighting (eg flash exposure of the flower and let the background go dark) or perhaps drape some coloured cloth behind the flower. I always carry a square of black velvet for this purpose.
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Photo By: Robert Jones
(K:1692)
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