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Critique By:
Peter Carucci (K:1672)
7/11/2003 7:11:46 PM
Excellent composition. B&W rendering makes for a very strong photo. I love these old warbirds - one of my favorite subjects. Well done, David.
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Critique By:
k b (K:1191)
4/29/2003 10:02:42 AM
I agree that this is a special photograph; thanks for posting it up and for sharing this image with the rest of us.
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Critique By:
Luis Costa - Lucaz (K:9205)
4/25/2003 7:33:28 PM
Very nice work, regards!
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Critique By:
MaryBell (K:32791)
4/25/2003 7:19:26 PM
David,
I want to give a yell for old cameras and light leaks. I read once that the appeal of "rough" cameras is the openess to serendipitous shots when working with them and I think it is true and makes for remarkable work. While trying to find my quote (which I didn't succeed at), I found another good quote regarding "rough" cameras:
"a tool that permits little control when taking the picture and so allows for (indeed, necessitates) a more spontaneous and intuitive approach to making photographs."
is desirable imo
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Critique By:
José Varela (K:636)
4/25/2003 6:01:22 PM
Perfect foggy composotion!
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Critique By:
j w (K:12641)
4/24/2003 11:13:48 PM
It has a certain charm, David. I have an old folder that shoots a lot like this, makes great pictures with a look all their own. I like the composition here, and I think the highlights on the bridge are really fine. My one nit about the whole thing is your shadow. Don't you hate when that happens? Still, I like this, and look forward to saeeing more.
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Critique By:
Kelly Abrams (K:233)
4/24/2003 10:20:18 PM
Looks like a old photo and I like it. Sorry I do not leave long comments I am learning right now about photography and commenting so if you please take a look at my pictures and let me know what you think. Thank you
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| Photo By: David Doler
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Critique By:
David Doler (K:467)
4/23/2003 6:01:37 PM
Ah...you're right.
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Critique By:
Steve Kompier (K:4629)
4/23/2003 4:52:17 PM
Nice, but it's a B-24 Liberator. The Mitchell is the B-25. I know...nitpicking...
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Critique By:
Cesar Pinedo (K:1151)
4/22/2003 6:51:38 PM
Good work David..nice gray tones and composition,regards..
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Critique By:
tarjei ekenes krogh (K:776)
4/22/2003 6:25:06 PM
nice touch. remove some on the left. miss some sharpness :-D ! son tarjeiav
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Critique By:
David Doler (K:467)
4/21/2003 6:04:01 PM
That's the front of the Grand Hyatt hotel! Its a big metal sign. It does look kinda interesting.
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Critique By:
Laura Lee (K:990)
4/21/2003 5:39:12 PM
Nice shot. It seems a little blurry, but that's probably because you shot it from your hip! What is that in the upper right corner? It is very interesting...
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Critique By:
David Doler (K:467)
4/20/2003 6:37:02 AM
No, your not a condescending jerk Jonathan. Growing as a photographer is about accepting critism - and your is valid and useful. The problem was that I had the flash on and the bright reflection of the flash is in the window just at the top of his head, so I had to crop it there. Also, it was a night and even with the flash, the f/11 lens on my pocket Epic just couldn't get enough light to the HP5. Nevertheless, he was a good sport about it and I have him 5 bucks!
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Critique By:
Jonathan Kane (K:10641)
4/20/2003 6:24:44 AM
This is almost a fantastic image. The problems for me are these: you cropped (either in the camera or in the darkroom) much too tight. I would have left some space above his head and below his chair. I'm not sure whether I would have centered him or not. Also it would be a good thing to notice lines and shapes in the background to further your total composition. Also this is not a great print. It's muddy and flat. I'm not trying to be a condescending jerk. This image really had great potential.
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Critique By:
HOrst Badorties (K:1383)
4/20/2003 6:22:02 AM
!!!!!!!!!
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Critique By:
Stephen Laszlo (K:2086)
3/24/2003 6:55:31 PM
This is excellent. A perfect b&w image. They way they are supposed to be.
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Critique By:
David Doler (K:467)
3/24/2003 1:35:57 PM
Sadly, these signs were removed when I was back in the city in mid march 2003. Oh well...
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Critique By:
AJ Haselwood (K:2148)
3/18/2003 2:19:54 PM
This reminds my of a Bernice Abbott type of image. Wonderful contrast and tone! A classic in style.
aj
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Well I think this is cool. I'm surprised it hasen't gotten any comments. I especially like the blown out look at the top. The composition gives the perfect NYC feel.
AM
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Critique By:
paul durrant (K:1047)
2/21/2003 9:09:22 PM
i like this shot very much. toning used is great! nice work
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Critique By:
paul durrant (K:1047)
2/21/2003 9:07:04 PM
very nice indeed david! love the tones and shapes/lines.
nothing wrong with pocket cameras!!
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Critique By:
David Doler (K:467)
2/21/2003 8:22:49 PM
I agree, especially the forground. Well, it was only a pocket camera, athough a good Olympus at that.
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Critique By:
paul durrant (K:1047)
2/21/2003 8:17:50 PM
this could have been very nice but it's just not sharp enough IMO
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Critique By:
jan martin petersen (K:356)
2/20/2003 6:42:12 PM
I like the graphic effect and the geometry. Nice job!
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Critique By:
Andy Eulass (K:13435)
2/19/2003 4:53:48 AM
Really outstanding work. The lines and patterns really grab my eye. Tones are outstanding too. Good eye for seeing this shot!
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Critique By:
sam clements (K:265)
2/18/2003 10:34:06 PM
Nice shot it looks really futuristic like something out of the movie "Minority Report"!
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Critique By:
Bart Aldrich (K:7614)
2/18/2003 7:36:05 PM
Very nice. Are there other versions from this shoot?
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Critique By:
karl magnuson (K:373)
2/18/2003 7:01:12 PM
David, I like the lines in this shot. Almost could be called abstract. I would be tempted to crop out the small circle in the bottom-center of the photo. keep em coming!
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Critique By:
Todd Miller (K:16464)
2/17/2003 8:25:52 PM
nice shot of this busy scene. i like it!
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