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Critique By:
JL E (K:9693)
11/6/2003 12:50:47 PM
Excellent photo!
Cheers,
Jose.
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Critique By:
JL E (K:9693)
9/30/2003 10:20:44 AM
good work! excellent contrast.
cheers
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Critique By:
PETER Y (K:134)
7/25/2003 1:15:28 PM
nice shot
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Critique By:
Nancy Sacry (K:358)
5/7/2003 2:46:51 PM
Cute! I think the angle is to direct. Moving a bit to the right would have softened the look a little.
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Critique By:
Russell Love (K:7006)
5/4/2003 5:20:27 PM
Paul,
Nice shot, but evidently Gabriele does not realize the depth of the large diameter hose (LDH). Only suggestion would be a smaller aperature and longer exposure for a deeper depth of field. Great colors and detail.
Later my friend,
Russ
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Critique By:
Eric Richard (K:2987)
5/4/2003 3:54:10 PM
nice shot!
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Critique By:
Manfred Bachmann (K:239)
5/4/2003 1:36:33 PM
Excellent work!
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Critique By:
HOrst Badorties (K:1383)
5/4/2003 1:31:46 PM
Cool, good perspective!
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Critique By:
Gabriele Pfund (K:11745)
5/4/2003 1:23:45 PM
Would have been nice if sharper, but still great shot with very good light and colours !!
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Critique By:
Benny Smets (K:2919)
5/4/2003 1:17:48 PM
good idea, nice composition
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Critique By:
Todd Miller (K:16464)
3/5/2003 9:02:54 PM
great shot! I don't mind the center column at all...the only thing I may have changed would be a crop of the left side, just to get the trash bins or whatever they are out of the shot. this is a great photo! is this in the netherlands?? they've got some big yellow trains over there.
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Critique By:
Mary Sue Hayward (K:17558)
3/5/2003 3:59:25 PM
To me, that strong center column helps because it lets the train rush PAST something. This images makes me feel akin to how I feel when standing at a train station and some train zooms through the station without stopping. Perhaps if the center column was not so centralized in the frame it would not be as dominant, but as is the image works for me.
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Critique By:
Christian Barrette (K:21125)
3/5/2003 3:35:18 PM
This shot really translates speed. It's almost an illustration of the principle of relativity. The train is a featureless yellow tube, glowing through space, and time. What distracts from that strong subject is the central column. Also, the neons are burned and weaken the compo. I wish you would have given more technical details.
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Critique By:
Marco Grandi (K:16680)
3/4/2003 3:41:33 PM
Splendid silhouettes!Nice colors of the sky.
Bye Marco.
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Critique By:
Matt Hardy (K:474)
3/4/2003 6:28:54 AM
Very nice!
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Critique By:
Ken Alexander (K:3905)
3/1/2003 6:59:15 PM
Really nice, Paul, I like the way the two heads are just barely separated. The pinkish cast and the slight detail in the child are nice touches.
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RAY CHARLES (K:2731)
3/1/2003 4:22:00 PM
Great story this shot tells, I do like all of the image, very clean great color, but, the kids are the sbject, i would of liked to have seen them fill the frame, may be shot at there level, and closer. Just IMO.
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RAY CHARLES (K:2731)
3/1/2003 3:59:32 PM
Nicely composed, good tones, a little motion with his hand, and the tree branch over his head, is a bit distracting, but over all, nice work.
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/1/2003 3:27:18 PM
Paul, to me(my humble opinion),this is a ten.
Great shot. Perfect capture, color, composition and the moment.
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Critique By:
Kelly Cooper (K:222)
3/1/2003 2:12:35 PM
I love the moment you have captured.
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Critique By:
Megan Forbes (K:4617)
3/1/2003 2:08:01 PM
Lovely profile of the child - you can see the ear to ear grin! Nice one.
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jennifer bullington (K:10)
2/28/2003 7:09:17 PM
I really like this picture it caputers that moment that all mothers would like to get. That moment that you child show trust. I love it.
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Critique By:
Keith Naylor (K:13064)
2/26/2003 2:13:47 PM
Paul, I see your point, but I have to agree with Enzo. Perhaps a shorter DOF might help distinguish the foreground from the background if you want to keep the colour composition.
Just a thought.
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Critique By:
Paul Treffers (K:321)
2/26/2003 1:10:15 PM
Thanks Enzo, I appreciate your comment. I see your point, although, this makes the image special to me. At a first glance you not focussing directly on the subject, it's more a composition of colors. After looking longer you discover the 'hidden' subject.
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Critique By:
Enzo Molino (K:531)
2/26/2003 12:58:23 PM
I like the shape of these plants. Seems the main subject needs more separation from the background, since it has similar color and texture (maybe some lighting on either the main subject or the background could give a better separation).
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Critique By:
Joe Smith (K:352)
2/25/2003 1:03:00 PM
i love shots of a night time sky...great colors. The silhoutte of the church would be better without the power line support.
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Critique By:
tess campbell (K:515)
2/24/2003 4:52:27 PM
precious....like the tone
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Critique By:
Nancy Smolak (K:124)
2/24/2003 3:42:50 PM
I think this photo has a wonderful potential but the floating arm disturbs me and keeps taking my eye away from the real subject - the relationship between the adult and the infant. Perhaps a crop above the ring would be more effective. It would give a nice triangular effect which would lead the eye from the baby's hand up the tips of the fingers to the ring across the knuckles back to the baby fingers. I think it mind lend a more intimate feel to an intimate subject. Well done technically. Wonderful range of tones and the rough texture of the towel contrastds nicely with the smoorthness of the baby's skin. Nice work.
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Critique By:
paul durrant (K:1047)
2/21/2003 8:21:45 PM
very nice - i also agree with the above even though it is great as is. perhaps try cropping just above the chairline.
just a thought!
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Critique By:
Don Martel (K:551)
2/21/2003 7:15:34 PM
great shot .. hope u shot a bunch more with various lenses 
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