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Critique By:
Subhrajit Basu (K:3102)
10/12/2007 6:16:18 AM
really a beautiful shot David. love it
regards
subhrajit
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Critique By:
SRS SRS (K:6731)
10/7/2007 7:28:29 AM
Excellent choice of b&w & what a great image for her to keep someday.
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Critique By:
SRS SRS (K:6731)
10/7/2007 7:27:05 AM
Another interesting one. I bet you could find a lot of unusual things in your line of work too. Well seen.
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Critique By:
SRS SRS (K:6731)
10/7/2007 7:25:07 AM
Clever title! Haha is right! Looks like your collection is off to an interesting start. You reallt have some nice ones!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
10/6/2007 2:29:32 AM
Interesante.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
10/3/2007 6:44:49 AM
This is a really excellent portrait...
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Critique By:
David Clark (K:422)
9/28/2007 4:28:17 AM
i was aiming for an overexposed background, however he ended upa little more exposed then i initally intended and the "I'm constipated" look is due to the brightness of the day outside. we were literally five feet from the ocean. i'll try the gray scale and also killing the red tones down a little and see what happens i'll post the results prob monday night.
thanks again for all of your input. would love to hear what advice you have for my other work that is up.
take care -
david
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Critique By:
Spencer Clark (K:409)
9/28/2007 4:07:23 AM
Hmm, I am trying to figure out what you were going for here. I assume you were intentionally blowing out the background and overexposing the subject. Unfortunately, this also lost the shoulders completely! It also shows his red skin tone quite well - though, I am not sure if this is what you were going for.
It is neat that I can see you in his eyes.
Not an overly bad expression though. It looks like either he is thinking or has a headache, but still not a bad expression.
What were you going for in this photograph? I really think a 2.8 or 1.2 aperture would have done a bit better if your intention was to bring attention to his eyes. Here, it really looks like you just used too bright of flash and compensated for too dark of a subject (aka, blowing out the background). I understand the high-key aspect, but this just doesn't seem to hit it. You might want to try grayscaling the image or at least lessening the red luminance. The red in his face is really distracting from the rest of the shot.
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
9/24/2007 3:07:51 AM
Lovely shot, David !!!.. Pretty much like a scene from a movie (like Runaway Bridegroom ??) LOL !!
Cheers ! 
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Critique By:
Nelson Moore [Kes] - (K:20241)
9/24/2007 3:03:54 AM
Great concept, David! I like the bright contrasts! Nice role playing here...perhaps the next time have the bride switch hands so that she is turned toward the camera & pulling hand is visable. Then again the idea of the title is conveyed in the photo as it is. :)
kes
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Critique By:
David Clark (K:422)
9/23/2007 11:56:29 PM
thank you for the advice. That exactlly what i am looking for from this site. advice from other photographers. thank you.
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Critique By:
Spencer Clark (K:409)
9/23/2007 4:47:19 PM
This is a nice shot, but some lighting from an off-camera flash would have helped tremendously on the right side. Losing all detail on her front side is a bit distracting to me. The next time you take a shot with these lighting conditions, consider putting a synced flash the right of the subjects in order to light up the dark side .... unless that was what you were going for.
Also, there is a good bit of noise in the background.
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Critique By:
M. Š. (K:2697)
9/23/2007 2:19:03 PM
LOL! Good one! : )
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Critique By:
Armen Haroutunyan (K:4787)
9/23/2007 9:21:59 AM
:))lovely shot
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
9/23/2007 3:51:16 AM
ja ja ja !!!
Simpática imagen!
Felicitaciones!!!
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Critique By:
Noemi Jurado (K:8849)
9/23/2007 3:06:19 AM
That's funny! Good sense of humor. Now on with the wedding ha ha ha!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
9/23/2007 2:51:59 AM
Muy simpática.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Pablo Dylan (K:63918)
9/19/2007 5:41:51 PM
Marvelous composition.
Pablo
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Critique By:
Marcelo Berraz (K:12906)
9/19/2007 3:59:08 AM
Muy bello y delicado; bravo!M.
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
9/19/2007 2:23:46 AM
Muy elegante y delicada.
Bravo!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
9/18/2007 2:03:48 AM
Muy buenos contrastes.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Pablo Dylan (K:63918)
8/10/2007 6:23:47 PM
Great still life.
Pablo
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Critique By:
Joe Pollard (K:130)
8/10/2007 3:04:21 PM
This is a great photo, David. You've come a long way, mah friend...
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Critique By:
Pawel Kwasnicki (K:9651)
8/10/2007 1:36:16 PM
amazing idea, great detail and strong contrasts! best regards, Pawel
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Critique By:
Claudia Perilli (K:31090)
8/10/2007 8:22:57 AM
Great still life, nice crop.
Claudia
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
8/10/2007 2:27:01 AM
Muy buen macro.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
8/9/2007 2:30:30 AM
Encantadora imagen... dulce y bella!
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Hyla Haxhiu (K:858)
8/9/2007 2:05:42 AM
Beautiful... angel...exellet David
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
7/2/2007 5:07:14 PM
Excellent ................
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Critique By:
Dino Lupani (K:15142)
7/2/2007 3:55:25 PM
Great study, excellent light and bw, perfect composition!!
Dino
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