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Roger Skinner
{K:81846} 11/6/2005
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yeah and get a chainsaw and take out one of the stems change the colours of the bricks and paint the wall another colour and update the air con and and sheesh... clver and interesting stuff all cntered around a lethal composition that is so wrong its gone out the other side. I'm with you on this Paul
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Gayle's Eclectic Photos
{K:91109} 10/30/2005
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ok, i say leave the top over the fence view as gives context and some added dimension...the bricks look like they have a smoothing filter added? but i like it here because whole comp has a photoart look.....like the palette and the intertwining trees....well seen,Paul! now on to check out the other one regards,gayle
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/30/2005
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Great idea, BTW. I'll see what happens when I pump contrast in monotone. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/30/2005
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Oh, gosh, Tom...you need higher resolution, as this is only 800 pixels high! ;)
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Tom Ross
{K:6453} 10/29/2005
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More good work. Thought about high contrast b&w? At first I thought you should have cropped the top but I sort of like the diagonal line. I do think you should size to avoid scrolling to see the entire image. Could be my screen resolution though. Anyway, interesting work.
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Erik Neldner
{K:10846} 10/27/2005
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...and that wall has such a strange quality to it. reminds me of frosted pop-tarts for some reason.
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Mark Julian
{K:36866} 10/26/2005
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Dear Paul, I have a feeling you were going with a WWKD thing here and of course the problem is that if you were to shoot it straight on the trees would be too far to the right and really need to go across the bricks to work. It's a problem. You either had to temporarily pull them across the bricks more (if you have a friend and some rope with you - seriously) other then that doing what you did but crop out the top as Lori suggested.It still looks good but I think if you did one of the 2 it would look better. Still good work, Mark
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Ömer Lütfü ELTAN
{K:346} 10/26/2005
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Good still life composition...Balanced shapes.
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Don Loseke
{K:32503} 10/25/2005
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They are a very pretty bunch of textures and colors. Don.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/25/2005
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I played with that, but felt it denied 'closure' on the object, Lori. What I did have to do as a compromise was to darken the blown out wedge of sky, to keep the eye from wandering that way.
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Lori Stitt
{K:75282} 10/25/2005
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Nice, love the textures and colors! Awesome find.
How about cropping it to just below the top of the fence?? I think I would like it even better without seeing over the fence. What do you think?
Nice capture, Paul, Lori ;)
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Rebecca Raybon
{K:26654} 10/25/2005
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Lovely patterns and textures.. great colors. That one little red brick really catches my eye.
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ARMANDO ALCÁZAR
{K:42404} 10/25/2005
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nice pic and textures!!
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Simon P
{K:615} 10/25/2005
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interesting shot
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