Justin has a point here, I may have part of the solution there is a lot to learn from this image! - I think the flash is the main problem. It makes the face flat, emphasizes skin irregularities, and gives shiny spots, as wel as a shadow under the chin. Your studio and outdoors work is indeed much better... Gyuzel does have potential as a model! As she has a wide face, loking sideways is a more favourable pose than lokking up or down (which broadens the face) as in gyuzel6 http://www.usefilm.com/image/944690.html and a great smile as in payday http://www.usefilm.com/image/943676.html That one is flashed too, but a sideways flash is less bad than one from the top... I hope you can use my remarks, sorry if they sound too critical...!
nice pose but the composition is rather boring. Contrast and colors are mediocre. nice, but not one of your better pieces. Your other work is pretty great!
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