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Judi Liosatos
{K:34047} 9/4/2005
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Good clean lineup with a simple but striking composition.
Judi
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Neal Nye
{K:15827} 9/3/2005
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Hillarious. No, I suppose you can't please everyone. But it's always best to go with your first instincts. It's a good shot regardless.
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 9/3/2005
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Oops, latest version has car removed - guess you can't please everybody.
Thanks for the comments Neal.
...Wayne
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Neal Nye
{K:15827} 9/3/2005
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When I first looked at this I thought it would be nice if there were something in there that broke up the symmetry a little, and then I noticed the yellow car. The perfect touch to keep things interesting.
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 9/3/2005
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Thanks Carlos, I actually cropped out some of the sky (perhaps my original intuitive framing was better !) - I've posted the uncropped version FYI with the yellow car removed too.
...Wayne
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Carlos
{K:12969} 9/3/2005
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Hello Wayne? now this is COOL and very ?graphic?! As a graphic image, the repetitive symmetry of the trees lined up like soldiers on the horizon line, create a very interesting effect ? which is exactly why you shot it... but I think be more effective if more space was added to the sky! Not the exact same proportion as the grass but maybe double of what it now shows! The added blue would enrich the frame and give the viewer more ?context?...
And, in the spirit on nitpicking maybe a good idea to clone out the yellow spot left of frame since it ?steals? the eye?
In all a VERY interesting shot, a fine initial idea perhaps not developed to it?s full potential.
Regards, always
C
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greg goodwin
{K:7089} 9/3/2005
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greenery, something we seem to lack here in nsw..great shot Wayne
Greg
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