Very strong emotional sense to this image. Some conceptual info clearly comes at the viewer. Formally this is really nice, great color hues and the warm tones agains the dark values. The subject is distorted and low, just a section of it all, as if she is caught in something larger, thoughts, or feelings that she cannot escape. Very interesting work here.
nice idea,but i think that composition is not good, too much details so the girl is not dominant, light reflection is also bad element, anyway nice try,try more versions :) best wishes