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Alain Mijngheer
{K:11733} 10/26/2004
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It's easy to comment on others work how you think it should be, so I did it myself. It's merely my vision and I hope your not offended by my "example".
Grtz,
Alain
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Alain Mijngheer
{K:11733} 10/26/2004
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I'd like a ride with these 3 lovely ladies ;)
But seriously now, what I like less here is the sky and the grass in front; just cut it away! Or cut it from the frontbumper so you don't even have to blur the license-plate.
And the girl in the middle is too dark, you know the hair and sweater...they're practicaly uniform black.
Still like this image altough.
Grtz,
Alain
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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 10/23/2004
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I am not convinced the problem lies with the models' facial expressions. There is a more fundamental question, the answer to which I am unsure of: what is your subject in this photograph? The models, or the car?
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Den Thompson
{K:30432} 10/23/2004
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Hi Bjorn. I agree with other comments. The ladies don't look happy at having their pic taken. I know what you mean about the car though. In Uk, I would say 95 out of 100 Cabriolet cars are driven by females so your titled is very good.
Den
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/23/2004
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Don't know about anyone else, but the blurred-out license plate just creeps me OUT!
No, seriously though, the thing that jumps out at me is the model far right seems to downright scowling.
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Mike George
{K:3429} 10/22/2004
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It's a neat idea but I think why it doesn't "pop" for me is that the models don't look happy or relaxed at all. 3 ladies and a convertible, generally caused a lot of fun where I come from. Perhaps a lighter mood, or facial expressions would help.
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 10/22/2004
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Bjorn, beautiful women
You don,t like this photo for you make it in front of and not digital
Also the woman in middle have not contrast
Teunis
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