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Benigno Bobby
{K:-1679} 9/22/2004
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wow...sexy...
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/20/2004
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Thank you so much for your comments, Emy! As far as the fold, I am inclined to leave it because it is natural and it is not unappealing. However, I will leave the final decision up to the model - the image is for her.
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emily savva
{K:21113} 9/20/2004
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excellent lighting again and i like the selection of the underwear... great colours that are improved even more on the skin tone... i don?t know about that crease... if you remove it might look unnatural taking in mind her positioning... but this is personal taste of course... love it anyway... a very stylish work!!!!
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Bea Friedli
{K:10189} 9/20/2004
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Hi Jeff..I like this pose the best of her. makes her look long which is beautiful
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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Ryan, 2 days, September 20. I can't get it until probably December or January.
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Ryan Greene
{K:3297} 9/18/2004
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Wow, very beautiful, too bad about the noise, but you can clean that up. I too am looking forward to the new Canon 20D, I've been drooling over it for a month now. When is it coming out?
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 9/18/2004
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The Canon D20 seems to be really nice camera.. =) Cheers!
Patrick J
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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A Canon 20D - it will be a while.
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John Fiore
{K:1077} 9/18/2004
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Great shot perfect lighting. Probably would have toyed with getting the crease out but that's the photographers choice. i don't think it really deters from the photo. I would not have really noticed unitl I read Karen's and Mike's comments. I would have said perfect composition until I read Carol's comments - so I have to remeber that on future shoots.
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 9/18/2004
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Ahh.. I hope you get the camera you are looking for.. =) Cheers!
Regards,
Patrick J
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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Patrick, I wish it was effect - it's digital noise. I have to run it through Neat Image yet. I need a better camera.
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 9/18/2004
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Great light and expression. Her long slim body works perfectly in this pose. Abit grainy on the side.. effect?
Regards,
Patrick J
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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Thank you Carol! That's whats missing from the pose - it was bugging me. This is critiquing I like! Miss you.
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Carol Cefalu
{K:8388} 9/18/2004
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I keep looking at your lighting...it is absolutely perfect from top to bottom...great job!
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Carol Cefalu
{K:8388} 9/18/2004
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Jeff..i would have dropped her right knee all the way to the ground and hid her right toe behind her left ankle..a(to maximize the "curves") otherwise shes beautiful and your techniques are perfect...
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Rebecca Raybon
{K:26654} 9/18/2004
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I'm just jealous that she has onely ONE crease! :) Still a nice pose.
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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Thank you Mike. Yes I noticed that and thanks, it will be removed in the final photo for Daisy's portfolio. The other minor flaw I see is that it is a little too light.
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 9/18/2004
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Thank you Karen. Yes, I toyed around with the idea of removing the crease with Photoshop. With Melissa's photos I removed creases on some and on others I left it. In one sense, leaving it is more natural considering the pose but removing it will improve her look so removing the crease will probably win out for her portfolio photo.
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Stephen Bivens
{K:7308} 9/18/2004
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great stuff.
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Mike Rexroad
{K:631} 9/18/2004
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nice shot and nice model. only flaw i see in the picture is maybe that small bit of skin folding on her side.
nice work.
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karen clarke
{K:18893} 9/18/2004
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I love the expression on her face, and the strand of hair that covers her eye. As I look at this more, I am not too fond of the crease in her side. Again your lighting is right on~
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