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Zandra T
{K:3635} 6/4/2004
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This is the type of angle that i really are starting to like, I haven't had much time to explore it yet but...that time will come. What comes to my mind here though is the lack of feminin form. Since the light is shining on her right hip, this part gets most of the attention, however, since she also bends away from this side it creates an illusion of that she has no or not much waste. Looking at her left, one see that she does. Turning her, just slightly, to the right, might enhanced the feminin form, without being to obvoius and whitout being taken directly from behind. An alternative would be to have less light on her right side, hence they eye would not be drawn as much to that area.
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Carmem A. Busko
{K:48785} 5/29/2004
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que linda composição, José!
Ótimo trabalho! Adorei a iluminação e o fundo!
Um abraço!
Carmem
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Marta Azevedo
{K:4237} 5/24/2004
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Tem razão, José, é interesante essa idéia da tocha que você quis dar à foto. Concordo com você.
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José Azevedo
{K:9845} 5/24/2004
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Oi Marta, obrigado pelo comentario, desculpe a demora na resposta.
Eu nao inclui mais costas propositalmente para que o tom quente da pele se sobresaisse aos tons frios do resto da imagem. Como se fosse o fogo no topo de uma tocha, por exemplo.
Acho que incluir as costas deixaria a imagem mais convencional. O importante e experimentar e ver o que as pessoas acham pois muitas vezes o que a gente imagina que esta passando as pessoas entendem de outra forma. Entao, temos que rever a forma com que estamos tentando nos comunicar.
Obrigado pelo feedback!
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Marta Azevedo
{K:4237} 5/21/2004
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Interessante, mas eu pegrai mais um pouco das costas. Só a opinião de uma amadora
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José Azevedo
{K:9845} 5/21/2004
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Hi John, thanks for the comment.
Took a fast look at your pictures. I have a great eye. Added you to my friends list so sometimes I'll feast my eyes with them. When I have decent time to examine it with the respect they deserve, I'll post some comments so we can share opinions. Regards from Brazil, José Azevedo.
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John Loreaux
{K:86210} 5/21/2004
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I like this! Nice work! My best,JOHN
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