I like the picture very much, it tells a story and I don't know what story. So the photo has to stimulate the fantasy. Therefore I think there is to much room around the children, crop it a bit more. And the color could contribute when it's more like an ancient picture, found in some box your grandmother had. I tried to show what I mean. Regards, Ted
Ottima inquadratura!! Considerando la camera che usi, penso che le tue foto in origine siano molto pił definite, ma che ci sia un problema nello scanner ... Ottime foto, comunque.... Ciao donato
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