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john amore
{K:14015} 3/16/2004
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well done my friend an other great one JOhn
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Bjorn Beheydt
{K:12096} 2/14/2004
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I agree Matej, the intention of the shoot was not to have artisticc photo's, but to have some photo's for her portfolio, so fashion and glamour shots. That's why I put it on here, even though the sharpness is a problem, but to learn if this is a good fashion/glamour shot or not.
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sandy c. hopkins
{K:17107} 2/13/2004
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i agree on the sharpness but i do like her expression..
nice job
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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 2/13/2004
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I partly agree and partly disagree with Kostas. While the photo may not be SPECIAL as in 'oh god this is so very creative I wanna hang it on my livingroom wall', I find of greater importance whether it is FUNCTIONAL as a fashion photograph. The pose and expression is there. If you sort out the sharpness, rearrange the sweater a bit to better present the fashion, get rid of the flash reflection in the teeth, and clone out the little white spot near the bottom right corner, I think you will have a pretty decent result.
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 2/13/2004
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The focus on her face is too soft. lake of sharpeness ;-) Lovely smile she has ;-)
Kiss, Biliana
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Bjorn Beheydt
{K:12096} 2/13/2004
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I agree that this isn't the best of the series, by far, but that is why I put it up here, to learn from it. The sharpness indeed is a problem here, due to slow shutter speed, but I liked the pose.
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Kostas Tzanetos
{K:22012} 2/13/2004
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hello Bjorn ;-)
in my opinion the picture isn't anything special. it's more like a snapshot and it doesn't reflect any serious photographic thought. In addition,the shutter timing is not very flattering for the girl.. technically it could be better- is the blurring caused by slow shutter fill flash?
well,I wasn't kind..was I ?
keep shooting,and please accept my best regards :-)
Kostas
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Chad Naujoks
{K:1242} 2/13/2004
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I like the composition and lighting here and the model is very nice looking. I agree about the sharpness, you should try to get a faster shutter speed (looks like hand shake) or use a tripod and a remote :) Try it again and I think you will have a great image!
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Melissa Schalke
{K:2070} 2/13/2004
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Hi Bjorn, looks like your capture isn't tack-sharp; but I have to say that I like the composition and the way she looks behind. Overall well done!
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