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RC. Dany
{K:64104} 12/11/2003
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Excellent Excellent .
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Ronald Harmon
{K:612} 12/11/2003
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Again, another strong shot. I love this composition because you have built it in an "upsidedown V" formation. Certainly, we know in this what the subject is and the strings of the violin is pointing to the face. I like the solid dark clothes too which also creates more of an interest in the face.
I feel the connection is here to and there is an intensity here that shows a depth and caring for the instrument. The lighting is fine however, I would have liked to see a version of this perhaps with a little more modeling light.
Also, it isn't that important but perhaps you could have pulled the model away from the wall a tad so that we wouldn't see that soft shadow on the left side of the frame behind the model's head.
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Tomo Radovanovic
{K:12788} 12/11/2003
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lovely done
nice toning
regards
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Michael Grace-Martin
{K:10183} 12/11/2003
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This looks a little "dull" on my second computer. How about this alternate version of it? Better?
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Pat Fruen
{K:12076} 12/11/2003
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I agree that it would be better if she were further from the wall. Other than that, a very fine image. I love the toning and the crop. This woman has such a delicate beauty...lovely.
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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 12/10/2003
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You need to distance your model from the wall. Other than that, I like the tight crop. Nicely done Michael.
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Hakan Aker
{K:14146} 12/10/2003
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Very nice shot...splendid toning and the girl's pose is very dedicated.Brilliant.Regards,H.
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sandy c. hopkins
{K:17107} 12/10/2003
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lovely portrait..i have always loved the violin...
the tonage and lighting are great!
:)
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