Well, Kim. This image has a lot of interesting features, but a few problems too. 1/ It's a lot too posed. It's unnatural, and the model doesn't feel comfortable. And the position of her left arm is "bizarre". 2/ It's too centered. Try putting the model on the 1/3 of the image, it adds dynamism. 3/ The overall light is OK, but there is a light spot on her nose that's not so lucky, and I would have added a back light to separate her from the background. 4/ I don't really like those two horizontal bars coming out of her (but for that one, I don't see what you could have done.. Maybe PS them out?) It's a nice start. If you have the opportunity to reshoot it, I'm sure you will do a lot better. Regards. Y
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{K:209486} 10/30/2003