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Jill Hatzai
{K:1854} 2/10/2004
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i really like the clutter in the background, comp is great. the image appears very grainy and a bit flat on my monitor. i bet a print would look great.
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Katarina Nyberg
{K:18} 9/4/2003
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Fine portrait!
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Artie Colantuono
{K:12275} 9/3/2003
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nicely lit TK...also like most of the framing......background works because it looks like he is hard at study or work and a very pensive expression....now the other shoe drops...The perspective of the lens works great for the pose and as mentioned by Andy, the blur of the fingers is a nice touch or lead in HOWEVER the distortion of the WA lens at this proximity makes the side of his hand and the forearm appear huge...it subsequently pulls the eye right to the lower right corner...I'll give you this you're defintely getting a ton better on getting to the point in your images and thats the most important thing right now for you....if given the chance to do a reshoot with this guy do everthing the same but let him leave out the hand...
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Andy Eulass
{K:13435} 9/2/2003
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Terrence, this is outstanding work. Man, I gotta get me a wider angle lens, just wish I could afford the 24mm Summicron for my outfit. Got a spare two grand? Anyway, this is outstanding with the capture of a fantastic facial expression and great DOF. The slight blur of the hands is a very nice touch. Excellent work yet again.
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luisa vassallo
{K:28230} 8/31/2003
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bellissimo ritratto
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luisa vassallo
{K:28230} 8/31/2003
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great b/w
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