John, thankx for the observations. I threw in some black grad on the left to fill up some of the hay. This is a fairly small girl, and I didn't want the hay to pull the image.
With regard to falling over, she was leaning with her right shoulder, and I believe I kicked the camera a bit when I shot this, and from a lower perspective as well.
I don't like this image. I don't like the black negative space and her pose combined with the framing makes her look like she is about to fall over. Also, there seems to be something strange going on around her forehead area, but I can't put my finger on it. You can do MUCH better than this!
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