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Harlan Heald
{K:15732} 6/28/2003
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Lovely composition with great depth of field. Congratulations on a beautiful image!
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MaryBell
{K:32791} 6/27/2003
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Hermen,
I remember the first one well I remember liking it but not able to put my finger on what didn't seem right. I honestly think I like this one better - however Fabio is right the mood changes immensely...and he is right about the Japanese poem feel.
PS left comments on the "Where's the Beef?" shot.
Mary
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Hermen Pen
{K:9168} 6/25/2003
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Thanks for your comments everybody... Maybe I changed too many things together. I played arould a lot with this one, and if I would have made one change at a time I could easily have made it to a dozen pictures as Fabio already suggested :) The original scan looked very dull so there are a lot of opportunities for 'pixel polishing'.
But...now that I have slept on it for a night I also think the first image is better. Strange, because I wanted to improve on it...The darkness of the image seems to make the flower look lighter and stand out better. The dark shadow in the top I still don't like very much however, it seems to be 'blocking' the flower. OK Fabio, maybe I'll try to make a third one that combines best of both :)
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Mariusz Margas
{K:473} 6/24/2003
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very nice :)
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Rhonda Prince
{K:17687} 6/23/2003
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Hate to disagree, especially with Fabio, but I like the second better. It is warmer...
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Rena Tsiflidou
{K:2606} 6/23/2003
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Although this is nice I like the vertical frame best; toning seems equally fine (or even better) in the original one!
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José Eduardo Cruz
{K:13180} 6/23/2003
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Wonderfull!!!
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Fabio Keiner
{K:81109} 6/23/2003
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to be honest, the first version seems to be better
but this one also works well
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maybe you should try to make a dozen: only the slightest difference could change the feeling entirely
both versions leave the feeling of being illustrations to a japanese poem
or zen koan
so laconic and decisive in its composition
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Hermen Pen
{K:9168} 6/23/2003
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This was the original post http://www.usefilm.com/showphoto.php?id=135017
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