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Tim Jones
{K:54} 8/23/2009
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Excellent Angle - I like how the sky is a small corner giving an escape ... but the main theme are the insecting angles ... good work
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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 3/22/2009
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Stunning work, Wayne!
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 3/7/2009
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Yeah, that's good too. It seems to create a different dynamic having the point of the shadow almost dead centre.
...Wayne
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Roger Skinner
{K:81846} 3/5/2009
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bloody excellent stuff mate... almost the Jeffrey Smart
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Roger Skinner
{K:81846} 3/5/2009
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enigmatic eh?? but I like Waynes original image too the feller has an eye thats for sure
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Saad Salem
{K:89003} 3/5/2009
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so very fine composition,colors,and perspective,
my regards,
Saad.
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Steve Marshall
{K:645} 3/5/2009
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Yes, go for it, it's a great subject. Actually I just tried cropping further to the right, to a square, and I think I like it even better - what do you reckon?
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Square |
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txules .
{K:62768} 3/5/2009
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excellent....txules
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Wayne Harridge
{K:18292} 3/5/2009
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Thanks for the detailed comments Steve.
I think it's time for another visit to try some variations !
...Wayne
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Steve Marshall
{K:645} 3/5/2009
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... something like this
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Steve Marshall
{K:645} 3/5/2009
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The blue and the orange work together very well. To enhance the "abstractness" of this image, I think I'd prefer a clear blue sky rather than the clouds. Having the sky clear would require more of a second look to work out what it is about. And there'd be more blue to work with the orange. Presumably this thing is not going to go away, so you could go back and try it on a clear day, and see what you think. It would be nice to get a bit of shine from the metal cladding too, although that might not happen - different time of day maybe? And finally, I'd be tempted to crop it to a vertical or square - just right of centre, either just left or just right of where the diagonal line hits the edge, but not so it goes exactly into the corner.
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Mark Southcombe
{K:2910} 3/5/2009
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Excellent. Great composition and tones plus the blue sky in the corner tops the whole thing off.
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