It is a good one for its composition, Len, and for the clarity of colors (especially that sky!) in that strong perspective. A very good way to get a centered image work so nicely as a non-centered image by putting the main subject in the middle but using unsymmetrical leading lines and perspective.
Unfortuantely the focus simply doens't allow to say much more about it. The overall plasticity may work, but I don't think that this one can be considered as "saved", at least not for these physical dimensions. And BTW, why those black stripes on top and bottom?
One I missed whilst I was off Len and I see you are still converting and transferring material. These are wonderful moments of pure nostalgia and I really should get around to seeing to my old material. Cheers again to you my friend....Ray