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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/23/2008
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Thanks a lot again, AJ! It's hard for me too, to think of a way to do that. Still working on it.
About the windows... I don't really know. I seem to jump between Ronen's comment/idea to not cut them, and the way they are now. It would a more "integrated" view with complete windows but then it would also look less concentrated on the door. That's my impression.
Cheers!
Nick
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AJ Miller
{K:49168} 3/22/2008
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That one on the right is what I had in mind - in a smoothed sort of way. I'd have to think a bit more how to do it, though.
BTW, I like the fact that the windows at either side are cut down the middle...
AJ
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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But not as sharp focus as it could be, I guess, or else it would be easily readable. I think it says "In questa cassa visse e mori", but I am not sure.
Anyway, it is the house of Alessandro Manzoni, a writer.
Thanks a lot for the comment, Avi!
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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Thanks a lot for the comment, Ronen! Always feel free to apply any critique, really!
You might be very right about the windows!
Cheers!
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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Thanks a lot again, Dave! Nice to see that you also suggest a black frame, as A.J. also did. I think it was the right thing to do here. So, in this case we are all converging.
Have a nice weekend!
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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Many thanks for the nice comment, Tony!
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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Thanks a lot for the nice comment and the detailed suggestions, AJ! I didn't even notice that the ochre band was ragged at the corners, so I thank you very much for telling. These are such ols images that I forgot that at that time I didn't know hoe to make an exact frame and used four lines of some width around the image. I must work on them now.
I attached both your suggestions. I think that I'd rather keep the simple one, but is the one at the right what you meant? I just copied a band from the window frames and pasted it at the edges of the image. I hope I understood you right.
Cheers,
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/22/2008
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Thanks a lot for the nice comment and the info, Ugo! Hopefully the image did catch a bit of the house's character.
Cheers!
Nick
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Avi
{K:70138} 3/21/2008
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what's wriiten above the name ? good shot !
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Ronen Helman
{K:7393} 3/21/2008
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very nice architecture shot.not a critique but i know if i would take this i would organize it differnt by not cut the windows.
lovely 7/7
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Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 3/21/2008
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Nicely done architectural shot, Nick, and great colours! Possibly just sticking to the black frame would have worked as well. Well seen and captured!
Dave.
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Tony Smallman
{K:23858} 3/21/2008
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Excellent composition and lovely warm colours.Very well cropped too!
......Tony
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AJ Miller
{K:49168} 3/21/2008
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The house is marvellous, and the composition beautifully set up - each element perfectly aligned and perfectly placed.
You draw attention to the frame with your "about". I find that too much of the image runs into the ochre colour - maybe an inner single pixel of black would help this. But also, the corners of the ochre band seem just a little ragged.
(Just a thought - it might be fun to make the ochre band from a cloned section of one of the outer borders of one of the windows. Or would that be too much?)
AJ
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Ugo Rimoldi
{K:6232} 3/21/2008
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Bella fotografia del Museo Manzoniano che ha sede nella casa nella quale lo scrittore Alessandro Manzoni visse con la famiglia dal 1814 al 1873, anno della sua morte.
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