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Aniko Heart
{K:26503} 10/4/2007
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Thank you for not being cross with me, Paul.
Now that you have explained your intention, I see it, and appreciate it very much. Also, I understand that 8x10 thing very well!
Ani :)
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/4/2007
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No, Ani. I appreciate your viewpoint.
My motivation to trim her reflection was intentional; I only wanted one of them to be 'whole', but made sure to leave a little room for her eyes.
Another important consideration for these model images is that I have to crop to 8x10, so the models can get them printed anywhere. That aspect is frequently a bit wider or shorter than I would desire.
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Aniko Heart
{K:26503} 10/4/2007
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This is cool, Paul!
Like the composition very much, though I woukd like to have seen her entire head in the reflection of the water, and also perhaps if the image were a little "brighter" (as in tone/contrast). There is a golden glow and I think it could be made a little more golden, to really bring out the best in lovely Selena. She has great attitude facially in this shot and is of good posture.
I hope you don't mind me forever putting my two cents worth in, my friend.
Hugs~
Ani :)
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Liz Wallis
{K:26133} 9/18/2007
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Th einclusion of botht the shadow and the reflection is a fantastic idea..like three images in one...wonderful shot Paul
Cheers
Liz
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Lucas L
{K:12145} 9/18/2007
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she is fantastic!!!
great moment once more!!!
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 9/18/2007
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Good suggestions, thanks Evangelos!
The original shot is a bit wider, but I was cropping for an 8x10 for her. I'll re-work this one.
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Evangelos Koutsavdis
{K:379} 9/18/2007
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Paul: This needs some work. For example re-cropping. The way it is right now, you are neither capturing the water reflection entirely nor the sharp shadow. They are both cropped. If you moved the camera diagonally you would have captured both. Furthermore, you may want to use photoshop to fix some contrast issues, spice up the color etc...
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Marcelo Berraz
{K:12906} 9/17/2007
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Muy buen retrato, buen encuadre y hermosos reflejos Paul; bravo!M.
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Keith Growden
{K:29240} 9/17/2007
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Very nicely done. Good reflection. Well done. Paul. Cheers Keith
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Debjit Ghosh
{K:3494} 9/17/2007
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wonderful and very nice FOV.
Cheers,
~deb
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