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Sally Morgan
{K:9219} 6/18/2007
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I like the idea behind this photo - but I think the light / metering has worked against you. The sky and bloke are a little overcooked whilst the girls are a bit underexposed (!)
It might help if you cropped to just above the guys mouth - I don't think his nose / eyes / pier legs are needed for the same idea to come across.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/18/2007
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:)
Yeah, I thought of cropping / cloning that out, but in the end left it there, Stace.
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Stace Walker
{K:4175} 6/18/2007
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i seee youuu!
in his sunglasses ;D
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Eren Gunes
{K:2457} 6/16/2007
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hahahaaa...I like it sooo much!i like girl's expression..i like his pose..it seems a Baywatch...scene!!really well composed..ah you are so creativeee!!i adore all your works...Great Works!
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steven carter
{K:2140} 6/16/2007
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very nice shot and love the contrast tones of the girls and guys. very well done
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/16/2007
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Hey, thanks, Mark.
I've got a couple alternate shots in this series; I may re-visit this idea with a different shot.
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Mark Julian
{K:36866} 6/15/2007
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I kind of like the whole concept thing here. It's a clever idea. I would have cropped it half way between the top of the sun glsses and his hair line (makes it slightly more abstract IMHO) and would not have the girl sticking her tongue out (too obvious). Their expressions are fine without the tongue. Over exposure doesn't bother me.... All in all I quite like it, keep it subtle I say I say (and it pretty much is, could have been a tad more but still works as is) Very Good job Paul !! 7+
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174136} 6/15/2007
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I like the idea, Paul, but wish he were not overexposed.:)
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Avi
{K:70138} 6/14/2007
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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM........ :)))
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 6/14/2007
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These ladies appear as if they are looking at a popsicle on a hot day. Very amusing! :) :)
--Jan
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/14/2007
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yes it is, Roger.
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Roger Skinner
{K:81846} 6/14/2007
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is that her tongue sticking out???
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arwa abdullah
{K:34415} 6/14/2007
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good work!
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Lucas L
{K:12145} 6/14/2007
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very nice idea,
I just love their faces.
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George Q
{K:-59} 6/14/2007
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What a lucky guy:-)I like the differences in contrast between the girls and the male
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