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Chuck Freeman
{K:13616} 11/30/2003
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Daniel, you have beautiful model. Try shooting film and you will be a true Glamour photographer
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Andrew Lahanas
{K:7062} 5/4/2003
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First let me comment on what a beautiful room mate you have, and what a lucky person you are. OK, now....Although you have used colour here it is still not quite saturated here on my PC. It looks a little flat. I love her expression and her look. It is quite sexy and I get the impression that the relationship with you must be a comfortable one for her to pose so relaxed with a friend. The tree on the right is a litle distracting. I would use Heather again and try to get in closer this time and throw out the BG with less DOF so it isn't so distracting. Because you have such a cooperative model I would use her every day. I hope you keep it up. Bye. Andrew.
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Jim Sallee
{K:82} 5/4/2003
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To echo the comments on symmetry, her hair and the bush on the right don't quite look right. I think it might be worth trying this again under more even lighting conditions as well. I like what you were trying to do here.
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Martin Fisher
{K:5393} 5/4/2003
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Hi Dan:
I like the color, OK, but...
I don't like the crop on her body. Looks to me to be to harsh. I know you tried to frame her in the tunnel, but I don't think that worked either.
Her expression isn't flattering either. Even if it's a mimic.
Sorry I can't say it's great, but it is my honest opinion.
Shyfox
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Subha Pindiproli
{K:10108} 5/4/2003
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This is a very interesting shot.. here is my reasons.. you have placed her right in the middle of the light of the tunnel. For a casual glance i thought she was wearing a colorful hat.. upon close examination she is not.. i really like the overexposure done to her face here.. I think overexposure by 0.5 - 1.0 stops on fair skin girls works very well, and it shows.. next there seems to be symmetry to her hair.. i wish she had parted her hair in the middle.. to top the symmetry...
good start.. please view some of my photos..
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