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Alan Shaffer
{K:5873} 12/13/2006
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Hi Neda, no need to be sorry, you were right about the focus. I was just seeing something diffferent in the image. All the best to you!!
-Al
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neda astani
{K:2824} 12/13/2006
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oh,my dear Alan, i'm so sorry for last comment to this photo, thanks for your expalnation for me. very good
Regards:Neda
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Alan Shaffer
{K:5873} 12/11/2006
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Hi Doyle, I agree with your suggestions to make this better. I did feel that the two related images in today's posts lacked focus and were not as good as they should be. Thanks for you always helpful comments and I appreciate you taking the time to really look at my images!
-Al
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 12/11/2006
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Wow Alan . . . interesting concept but (to my eye) the OOF facter is distracting. Having read the comment here I understand that you've attributed this to the submerged leaves and I do very much like the 'Impressionist Painting' feel to the image . . . but the eye seems to seek a focal point to lock on to. I would suggest a leaf floating on the surface or some other focal point that you could lock in on would help this immensely . . . certainly an interesting concept.
Season's Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Alan Shaffer
{K:5873} 12/11/2006
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Hi Neda, thanks for the comment. The leaves are partially submerged, so some of the seemingly out of focus look is from the water. I liked it because of the painterly look it gave to the leaves.
-Al
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neda astani
{K:2824} 12/11/2006
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very good capture my dear Alan , very nice but alittle focus... however nice shot
Good luck...Neda
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