very good work ... the man on the left is certainly the star ... as a thought, i was looking at the image in terms of cropping the big guy in the background out (right side) .. how to do that seems difficult, but (using my computer screen to "crop") i just tried croping out his open mouth - down as far as his bottom lip and it looked ok, - the top of th middle mans head is a bit cut off, but the man on the left is still in full, i thought it really looked good, and the "open mouth" man in the backgroung now serves as a dark area to help illuminate the man in front .. .. silly me, only my thinking... as an image it's appealing and draws you in ... like Cartier Bresson ...