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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/30/2006
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I like Your way of thinking Doyle !!
You know I was just kidding ...and I think it is also a good thing to have a good vocabulary and not the standard American slang all the time.
You seem to have achieved a well balenced vocabulary to communicate with all...and this is a Gift!
I am so greateful to have the opportunity to share ideas and thoughts with both You and Marlyce.
Best wishes,
Michele~
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 8/30/2006
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Heheheheee . . . sorry Michele . . . I'm usually better at hiding my education (trying not to sound too erudite so as to felicitate an expeditious transfer of meaningful constructive critiques in a less than supercilious manner). :)
While I think most people understand the big words that sound so 'intellectual' it doesn't help to make communication easier . . . only more accurate. I have found talking to people and with people that even those with advanced degrees could (and should) be given a hard time for sounding too stuffy!! ;) So when I become pompous I assume and expect you'll be certain to let me know!!
By the way . . . accidently doing the right thing happens to all of us on occasion. Were I you, I would refer to it as an "Instinctive" composition . . . which sounds better than accidental and, frankly, is likely to be more along the lines of the truth! :)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thank You for the really well discribed critique Doyle. Honestly I wanted to kid you and tell you I had to look up half the words but I didn't and in critiqeing this way you did teach me what I'd actually done right ! I guess you know I accidently make the right moves sometimes ...ha! It's true I can say it.
Thank you,
Michele~
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 8/25/2006
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Very nice Michele . . . you did very nice with this one. The lovely and well exposed openness on the lake surface and the turgid line as it breaks onto the damp shoreline . . . Lightness gives way to darkness and shadow . . . with parallel oblique diagonals to delineate layers . . . one being a branch which breaks through the different layers . . . and, overall, a soothing - even tranquil image. I can almost hear the water.
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thank You Mary. I am soo glad you felt this, cause I sware this is what I was hoping to share ! It felt this way to me, very calm, and peaceful and ooh so quiet.
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thanks so much ..... it reminded me a bit of your lake.
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thank You Mary
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thank you nessa . I am very happy you are back up and posting again.
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jessie voigts
{K:6772} 8/25/2006
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i like this, m - esp the darkness of the beach and the lightness of the water. great shot!
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/25/2006
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Thank you Nacho !
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Mary Slade
{K:40338} 8/25/2006
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This is beautiful- the lighting and the textures. It seems so calm and so soothing.
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 8/25/2006
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Nice cool blues and looks very tranquil..nessa
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 8/25/2006
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stunning. marvelous tones. wonderful place.
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