Hi David, I'm rather surprised this photo has received no comments yet, especially since you've posted it in the Critiquers's Corner...
I must admit I've opened this photo a few times, and decided against commenting straight away, because it doesn't really tick for me... Explaining why is more difficult.
The photo has a strange feel over it, as if it's a badly exposed and printed Medium Format image, a bit excessive on the green tones.
There also seems to be a slight haze over the photo, rendering it rather flat, and reducing the appeal of the photo.
This, of course, is all very subjective, and looking at your portfolio, I can only conclude you've done that intentionally. It fits very well within your style. But it also has a less dominant eye catcher / subject.
Another thing that kinda bugs me is the balance between the subjects, most located on the left of the image; the twigs on the right doesn't quite manage to compensate that, and are more of a distraction than an addition.
I realise this sounds rather negative, and it is, The longer I compare this photo with the rest of your portfolio, the more convinced I am that you can do much better than this. I've just been thinking out loud, so don't take it too seriously.
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