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Saqib Zulfiqar
{K:2745} 5/17/2005
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Thank you Angelo for your help. I see your point. Actually if you look at the selective desaturated version the light is almost the same as your corrected version. I went through a lot of trouble to show the direction of the light on top right. Thanks for all your help, appreciate that.
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Angelo Villaschi
{K:49617} 5/17/2005
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Saquib,
That is interesting, with the selective colouring. I actually feel if you were desaturating it to mono, it would work better fully desaturated.
Here's one I made with a couple of adjustment layers to basically "burn in" the overlit corner and increast the saturation on the red cup.
The main thing is that you started with a fairly strong image and concept.
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Saqib Zulfiqar
{K:2745} 5/17/2005
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Thank you Onur,
Hanggan,
Jeanette &
Hakan
for your nice comments.
Best Regards,
Saqib Zulfiqar
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Hakan M
{K:2145} 5/17/2005
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Very interesting and nice capture Saqib! The glass seems like it's on a wall! Great work, congrat and best wishes...
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Jeanette Hägglund
{K:59855} 5/17/2005
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Great green and red mix with a cool shadow from that glass and so surreal somehow!
Jeanette
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Hanggan Situmorang
{K:37833} 5/17/2005
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Simply excellent composition, Saqib. Great lighting and shadows played. Well done, congrats!
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Onur Özbakan
{K:16763} 5/17/2005
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excellent composition Saqip! light and shadow, looks very good, well done!
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Saqib Zulfiqar
{K:2745} 5/17/2005
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Thank you Angelo for your very interesting comment. I did a couple of variations because I had the same concerns. I tried the monochrome version and then a selective monochrome version. Attached are the files. Could you please have a look at them and provide your input. Thanks for your time.
Best Regards,
Saqib Zulfiqar
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Saqib Zulfiqar
{K:2745} 5/17/2005
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Thank you Jon and Nathan for your nice comments. Appreciate that.
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Angelo Villaschi
{K:49617} 5/17/2005
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Nice study of light and shadow. It's simple and clean.
The colour is a bit unbalanced IMO - too much yellow/orange? And the light on the paper is very uneven.
This would work really well in monochrome, I think.
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Nathan Gillies
{K:1011} 5/17/2005
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cool, very cool Saqib....surreal to look at.
Great idea.
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Jon Slater
{K:1340} 5/17/2005
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I think it's very impressive. it's simple, and well lit. The angle of the glass grabs the attention. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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