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Leslie Cohelan
{K:20807} 9/21/2003
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a very playful pose that you captured well....the expression on her face, the puckering of the lips, and the glance over her shoulder all work...the color balance seems just slightly off...has just a bit too much green to the hair...the shoulder is a bit over exposed, but does not distract too much from the image...excellent dof on this one...might consider cropping it to just below the shoulder..leave her back out of the composition...I think it might be more pleasing
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Pedro Libório
{K:53861} 8/29/2003
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beautiful shot and model...interesting title!
regards.
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Anna
{K:2994} 8/29/2003
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Stefan, this is a very nice portrait, one of your best.
Do you mind me giving you some advices to improve your lovely pictures?
First: try avoiding the high sun hours (betw. 11AM and 4-5PM) - If you can?t, just put your model in the shadow and use a reflector to give her some smooth light.
I?m sure you can do even better than you already do! Good luck and keep shooting. :-)) Anna K.
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Hayri CALISKAN
{K:16195} 8/29/2003
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Beautiful portrait...But lighting??? I am not sure that this is a special effects or no? Any way this is just my idea.
Regards, Hayri.
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Chris Lauritzen
{K:14949} 8/28/2003
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Stefan,
The pose the model has is good but the shot does not show that off. The main problem is the lighting, its way to harsh. He shoulder is totally blown out with her face in a deep shadow. You need some form of fill lighting in there to help pull her face out of the shadow. Only other thing I see is the image is soft and needs to be sharpened up.
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Ronny Van Eeckhoutte
{K:12734} 8/28/2003
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The soft focus works very well here. A nice choice of tone.
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Dré van den Bogaard
{K:364} 8/28/2003
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Hi Stefan, her look is awesome. On my screen however, the shot seems a bit 'greenish' and the light on her shoulder and part of her back is a bit hard. Apart from all this I think this is a very pleasant shot to look at. Thanks for sharing! Regards.
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T Glow
{K:14955} 8/28/2003
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Hi ! another nice work this beautiful model! Hugs,T.
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