Yes, much nicer. I might even crop it tighter so that none of that shadow frame is visible. I wouldn't worry about losing the bottle on the right: there is more than enough striking variety in the middle. That's a bedroom window to envy! cheers, John
Lovely. I wonder if it wouldn't be more striking taken on the same level as the sill and with the frame cropped out, leaving the light, water, and colors only. cheers, John
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