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Avi
{K:70138} 12/31/2009
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cinematic presentation of photograph ? kichhu cinema-i suggest korte pari: Satyajit Ray-er Apu Trilogy/Shohor trilogy, Akira Kurosawa'r pretty much je kono cinema, Wim Wenders er Wings of Desire, Writwick Ghatak-er Subarna Rekha, Vittorio de Sica'r Umberto D/Bicycle Thief... and above all, Robert Bresson -er The Man Escapaed/L'Argent dekh.
Ar chhoto sir ke jaano na ? kan dhore dariye thako :P
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Anindya Chakraborty
{K:12765} 12/30/2009
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btw ami ai recent cinematic presentation of photograph niye aktu mete achi...kichu bhalo link pele aktu bolo...i m eager to see.
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Anindya Chakraborty
{K:12765} 12/30/2009
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hmm...bhalo discussion hoyeche dekhlam...jeta besh bhalo. Amar mote kintu durer boat gulo add korche...benaras er ghate kichu lok bose adda marche ebong sei lokgulo boat owner I am sure....jara kaaj peyeche tara lok niye ghure berachche....is it not a simple yet beautiful story about benaras? sudhu lok ba sudhu boat ki ai chobi take complete korto? ami aktu close e giye hoyto prefer kortam....but haan ami ai comment ta been there bole bolchi. choto sir ta ke??
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Ryca C.R.
{K:3895} 12/30/2009
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thanks for tour sharing this picture, Deb..
I love the bird eye angle, the color, and the dimension of this shot..
congrats,
Ryca
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D e b
{K:9399} 12/30/2009
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Doc I love your acid critic just because of a simple reason. We all know we are good at capturing moments but sometimes we might not be sure if it is a good poto or not because of simply because one might not able to take out himself out of the photo!!
me and Avi discussed a good point below which you will not understand :) ..... but we talked about your idea and I will rework this one.
Thanks!!
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D e b
{K:9399} 12/30/2009
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choto sir durdanto boleche etaa!!!
tomaake aagei bolechi aami, raw PJ kintoo aamar aar khub ektaa bhalo laage na. Art PJ / People Photography taai aamar bhalo laage. Tumi jodi aamar last 12 - 15 ta chobi dekho, taahole aasha kori byaparta ujhte paarbe.
Shutorang I will rework this image. Ei chobi ta pooro puri geometry r i chobi. Scene ta dekhe i aami ei shotaa r ektaa chotto thubnail moner modhdhey kolpona korechilam. Shei thumbnail ta aamake only geometry i dekhiye chilo!!
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Avi
{K:70138} 12/30/2009
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... maybe just keep the one at the extreme.. just to keep balance... and clone out the other two..
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Avi
{K:70138} 12/30/2009
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chhoto sir-er kotha-y: the geometric aspect will make a photo more times than it will fail. ei chhobitar khetre exactly txules jeta bollo - oi radial perspective tai key geometric element. tai dur-er nouko 3 -te break the harmony.
Tui jodi chhobitake simply journalistic/documentary angle theke dekhish, tahole don't touch. otherwise, YES.
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Umesh Padhye
{K:1726} 12/30/2009
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Nice Capture.
Best wishes for new year.
Umesh
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D e b
{K:9399} 12/30/2009
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clone out koraa jetei paare. but otaa ki shotti i distract korche? oi nouko goolo miliye i kintoo chobi ta. bhalo kore jodi dekho... lokgoolo just golpo i korche... aar bisheh kichu interesting nei oder modhhdey.
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Avi
{K:70138} 12/30/2009
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I think I agree with txules.. kichhu add kora ta unethical holeo, composition-er sharthe kichhu subtract kintu kora jetei pare.
Tor nijer kothatei: it's not what to include that makes a picture, but what to exclude.
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socratic irony
{K:809} 12/30/2009
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beautiful composition, very good shot.
regards.
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txules .
{K:62768} 12/29/2009
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Hi Deb, love the radial disposition of the boats around the jetty and as always the reach colours and ambience but I think compsoition is not perfect: after fix my view on the people it goes very fast to the background where the three boatas distracts my attention so that I'd clone out the boats (even the boat with people on the left) or would try a tight crop going for a panoramic format (not the best, none the less)
it would be nice more light on the poeple's face as well
being one of my favourite photographers you get some of my more acid critics :)
take care brother
doc
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