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Stephen R. Zang
{K:1044} 5/21/2003
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Kelly, this looks a wee bit soft to me. Might be the scan, I'm not sure. The pose looks good, but is a bit standard, kinda reminds me of those pictures that come in the frames when you buy them. Nice, but normal looking. I agree that you should try some different camera angles, and try cropping some excess area around them that isn't really doing much. Exposurewise looks great!
Stephen
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Bill Akata
{K:2929} 5/21/2003
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Nothing bad here but there's nothing really that catches the eye. Just another smiling kids shot. I know it's difficult to have imagination and originality in every photo you take but you should look to do something different from the run of the mill. Perhaps posing your subjects differently or taking the shot from a different angle will give this photo more freshness.
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Eric Goldwasser
{K:4294} 5/21/2003
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this looks really good Kelly. Good light, good exposure, good background, good models with great smiles!
Experiment with some crops. Russ's square crop looks good. I'm sure you can come up with others. :-)
Great job!
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Russell Love
{K:7006} 5/21/2003
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kelly,
I thought you said you was out of shots to post!!!! lol. Hey i like the lighting on this one, pretty good job there. I played around with some cropping and see what cha think. I'll attach it to this comment.
Later my friend,
Russ
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Danny Provost
{K:812} 5/21/2003
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Kelly, nice portrait. You've got the light right. I went through your portfolio, a lot of very nice shots. All of your images seem to have the same size. You might try playing around with different crops. This photo I think would look good with a square crop. Good job!
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Elin M
{K:842} 5/21/2003
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A nice familly picture that brings happines trough their honest smiles, well captured and perfect wheater for a shoot like this!
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