this is a really good portrait. you've caught her from an unflattering angle but found power and beauty in that. the slight motion blur in the highlights adds quite a bit. this is a common fashion technique, and you've used it well. especially nice is the way the blur puts fire in her eye, complementing the overall power of her stance. this is the best piece in your portfolio, and i think that's because it captures the energy of your subject, as any portrait should. in the main, your runway shots feel kind of flat. better light would help, but even without, if you can get in close, as you did on this, shoot from more unusual angles, and do more with blur, you can get some pretty exciting images.