Michele, perhaps try lighter, keeping a dark vignette? The image is good, just too dark for most folks to appreciate. Of course, you don't want to lose the mood with too much light. Maybe B&W or sepia if brightening loses color correctness. As is, the thumbnail is so dark you won't get a lot of views/interest...just the way of usefilm, I think. Kes
Lovely story telling in this image. I like the lighting and the blurred enthusiasm of the children. It feels like they are on their way to a swim rather than back from one. CC
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