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Andy Ly
{K:716} 6/23/2003
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I like this image a lot. The tonal separation is great and all the values are snappy to say the least. This is a very good example everyone should yeild to, when shooting B&W. With great tonal separation in hand, I could see this image with a lot more real whites. The values end at around Zone VII and could really use Zone VIII in some areas to make the image more dramatic.
As far as subject matter goes, I cannot find a central subject. I've spent quite some time trying to figure out what you were trying to convey through this image. My only conclusion is that you were aiming for an abstraction. If that was the case, I find that this image would benefit much more if shot with a longer focal length to flatten it's perspective.
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jan martin petersen
{K:356} 3/31/2003
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You've achieved to bring out a rough feeling of the concrete walls. Nice use of light and a very good composition.
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Alisa Mudge
{K:12511} 2/13/2004
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Thanks Razvan, Nita, Todd, aj, and Sean.
Todd -
These batteries are scattered around San Francisco, usually overlooking the bay. They were used as millitary storage sheds and shooting points.
Sean -
This is for you. Now I don't want to hear any more bitchin' about where you stand on here !! :p
Alisa
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sean slavin
{K:3488} 3/31/2003
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nice one. like this view better than the first but i liked the tone in the first one. 8)
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AJ Haselwood
{K:2148} 3/31/2003
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Excellent as always!
aj
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Todd Miller
{K:16464} 3/31/2003
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i like this composition. the texture on the stairs is great!
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Nita M
{K:4986} 3/31/2003
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Nice composition.
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Razvan Toma
{K:787} 3/31/2003
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Very good composition Alisa.Well done.
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Alisa Mudge
{K:12511} 2/13/2004
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Aiman Nassar :
Beautiful composition, tones and wonderful abstract Alisa.
Nuked it cause the flatness was driving me crazy.
Thanks Aimen.
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