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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/13/2006 4:51:44 AM
Well Evaristo. I read the other comments. I like it from the outset...I think focus is a bit soft. Could be the water droplets. But what I really like is the symbolism that conveys your title. No place for that lonely purple grape to fit in with the neat orderly little society. I am not sure that being immersed in the mix would carry the same iconoclastic idea. Good work. Follow your bliss, Evaristo.
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Critique By:
z z (K:7231)
9/12/2006 9:42:30 PM
Nice set up and the greens ones are so nicely formated. I like your version but also think the purple inbedded at the same formation as the green would make it seem like a rebel trying to fit in.  There is always one in every bunch!
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Critique By:
Joe Johnson (K:8529)
9/11/2006 7:57:29 AM
Since they are the same sized grape, another approach might be to place the red seedless among the green seedless, perhaps in some pattern. That would require more grapes and a wider shot. I don't comment on whether it's 'too dark or light' because people have their monitors adjusted all over the ballpark. But it might have more contrast, perhaps by sliding the high level over to the tail of the histogram.
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Critique By:
James Cook (K:38068)
9/10/2006 11:24:25 PM
That's the great thing about silicon: it's stable at very high temperatures.
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Critique By:
James Cook (K:38068)
9/10/2006 11:22:36 PM
I like it. The ordered arrangement gives good stage for the purple grape. I might go a little darker with it? Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Critique By:
Stan Ciszek (K:56854)
9/10/2006 10:28:29 PM
Hi Evaristo,
Very interesting portrait,
Best Regards
Stan
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Critique By:
cessy karina (K:14205)
9/10/2006 10:03:19 PM
very nice idea, but maybe the placement of the red grape could be more natural, and a little bit more contrast or play of lighting might enhance it.
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Critique By:
Dubravko Grakalic (K:25235)
9/10/2006 9:43:29 PM
nice colors!
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Critique By:
Evaristo E Mitchell (K:511)
9/9/2006 4:25:41 AM
Luke__I am sorry for been so lazy. For the past three or so decades, the Caribbean and Latinos new yorkers have brought our culture to New York City. This is our parade in Brooklyn,New York.
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
9/6/2006 2:07:57 AM
Evaristo, my sister and her SO just came back from Caribana in CA. Similar images. Where is this? Nice color like Alicia mentioned.
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Critique By:
robert jedrusik (K:806)
9/5/2006 11:57:16 AM
phone or pocket money is the best! shot too
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Alicia Popp (K:87532)
9/5/2006 3:17:01 AM
Ufffffff... qué trajes parece el carnaval de Río!
Felicitaciones pòr estas bonitas imágenes!
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
9/5/2006 3:14:30 AM
Colorido y excelente retrato... felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
9/4/2006 7:50:21 AM
My dear friend, this is one of your usual very impresive portrait captures which I did enjoy viewing a lot.
Very great lighting, colors and details.
Wishing you all of the best
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
9/4/2006 1:15:59 AM
Encantador y clásico retrato.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Evaristo E Mitchell (K:511)
9/2/2006 4:26:05 AM
You are so right Luke. I never did like to photograph any kind of white object. I am trying much harder to avoid it now that I am using digital. Tomorrow I will put p three images of the bride in white. I will ask the viewers to share with me how they get detail and texture under similar circumstances.
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
8/30/2006 11:36:15 PM
Evaristo...I think you nailed this one. Only problem I see is the blown out front portion of the angel's beautiful dress. Very well done!
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Critique By:
Cathy Carroll (K:28144)
8/28/2006 3:42:53 AM
What a perfect portrait of a very relaxed young lady. She looks so serene and beautiful. CC
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Critique By:
Eligiusz Langner (ennio) (K:3006)
8/27/2006 9:43:17 PM
good portrait
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
8/27/2006 9:40:37 PM
I wonder, why they keep saying, that the angels are coming from the very high sky, out of this world, while the most beautiful angels like this one, are all with us on earth.
Very beautiful young lady here, very great light, great details and skin tone.
Wishing you all of the best my friend.
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
8/27/2006 9:36:48 PM
I have always loved your portrait work my friend, they are so rich with their lighting, details, colors and they are so pleasant to view, this portrait capture is a very good example of what I was referring to.
Wishing you all of the best my friend
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Critique By:
Lola Johnson (K:138)
8/12/2006 1:04:14 AM
I concur. Great hair light. Beautiful child also!
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Critique By:
Luke Luther (K:14693)
8/9/2006 4:58:55 AM
This one may be better than the first one I offered my comment for. Excellent lighting. Now all you need is a good hair light. Luke
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Critique By:
Phillip Cohen (K:10561)
7/14/2006 7:21:26 PM
My goodness! That is one well hung salad! Great idea and a lot of fun.
Phil
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Critique By:
Name Surname (K:3712)
7/14/2006 4:06:28 PM
Wonderful spontaneous smile.
Beautiful natural portrait.
Davide.
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Critique By:
Name Surname (K:3712)
7/14/2006 4:01:45 PM
Here in Italy there's a famous market who made its fortune with a series of advertisments like this one.
Of course the jokes were not sexually oriented, however there was an anonymous guy who made the...let's say.. unofficial series.
Being anonymous I don't think he made its fortune but the unofficial series was much more funny than the original one.
Compliments...(well.. I mean the picture, not the salad...:-)))
Davide.
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Critique By:
Richard Marks (K:3809)
7/14/2006 2:22:52 PM
Funny....it's looks like....euhhhh
ingredients for a salad.
Regards, Richard
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Critique By:
John Segon-Fisher (K:2580)
7/14/2006 5:06:04 AM
Superb B&W capture - great sense of heat, character and mood.
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Critique By:
Dawn Stephens (K:909)
6/27/2006 9:17:38 PM
Janyah is beautiful! Her features and her eyes remind me of me. I bet her smile lights up her face! One thing I would have done different and that is I would have pull her off of the background, to me the background takes the emphasis off of her, but it is a wonderful shot.
Dawn
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Critique By:
Dawn Stephens (K:909)
6/27/2006 9:09:59 PM
This is a really nice picture. The lighting is perfect, and the tones are beautiful!
Dawn
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