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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
12/23/2006 4:46:51 AM
Too much Photoshop for me but I like the angle and beauty of the model.
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| Photo By: Brad Morris
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/25/2006 6:08:17 PM
Thoughtful intimate portrait. Avoiding the over exposure on the nose and removing the earring might help make it even more impactful. Still, one of your best I feel.
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| Photo By: L.V. B
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
3/18/2006 10:47:12 PM
Very nice dizzying effect. It might be nice if you cleaned the figures on the bike path behind the lead rider. Lovely nonetheless.
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| Photo By: marcin klepacki
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
3/2/2006 10:00:35 PM
Nicely done!
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| Photo By: marília campos
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
12/16/2005 7:57:13 PM
I commented on this photograph in March and was pleased to see that the B&W version won an award in the B&W annual 2005. Congratulations!
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| Photo By: Peter Masters
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
12/9/2005 5:11:53 AM
The two flower pots and garden hose are a distraction.
Sharpening in Photoshop does not equal proper focus.
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| Photo By: Peter Daniel
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
12/4/2005 4:48:16 AM
I would like to see better composition and focus.
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| Photo By: fransisca widowati
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/27/2005 2:04:48 PM
This is great fun.
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| Photo By: Ray Heath
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/25/2005 3:03:30 AM
I know it is very difficult to get these kind of shots. Wonderful that you captured his wings that way. Next time, get him on the right and show some landscape.
How can such nimble feet launch such flight?
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| Photo By: Adriane Chernus
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/25/2005 2:42:06 AM
Thank you Brad for your comment.
I receive so few I hardly feel like a member of this site.
I often think this site name should be changed to UsePhotoshop.com - anyway, you are right that I should play with this image some more. I have the negatives around here somewhere, a decent negative scan instead of this flatbed scan of a print would probably be the thing to do.
Aloha to you Brad!
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/25/2005 2:32:07 AM
Thank you Brad, this image is being used in a local magazine next month.
This photo is a favorite of mine.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
9/24/2005 2:48:53 PM
Nicely done. Her hair and wardrobe are wonderful. Oh, and those shoes!
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| Photo By: Jonathan Wollin
(K:958)
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
8/7/2005 5:26:05 AM
Pleasing image with an interesting color palette.
Thank you for sharing your work here.
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| Photo By: al lapkovsky
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
8/7/2005 5:22:00 AM
Hi Matt,
The composition is OK, be aware that the photograph is tilting to the right. This could and should be corrected in photoshop.
Notice that detail has been lost on both of his arms and face from over exposing.
Your portfolio has a nice selection of different types of subjects! Keep up the good work.
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| Photo By: Matt Barclay
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
8/5/2005 7:15:11 PM
The different planes are very pleasant (the guitar and his face). The framing of his face with shadow is of course excellent. Small details like his collar, the hair on his face and their shadows, the scar on his finger etc. add to the charisma of this shot.
I would like to see a little less negative space in the bottom right, but I can see that it may be part of your style.
Imagine how pleased he will be to look at this wonderful portrait 20 years from now.
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| Photo By: Rebecca .
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
8/1/2005 6:06:50 PM
Nice to have a ready model that is so beautiful.
The light appears to be too harsh - all detail has been lost in the front of her dress. The gap above her head is a bit too large (you might consider framing this subject a little lower), also that spot above her head on the right should be removed.
Best regards, AS
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| Photo By: Joe Stewart
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/19/2005 1:46:52 AM
Judy, Thank you for your comment.
Gustavo, Gracias por su comentario.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/19/2005 1:28:39 AM
Ahh, the good old days. Dad will cherish this for a long time to come.
Very pleasing portait.
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| Photo By: Judy Bodden
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/18/2005 8:45:22 AM
Absolutely frightening!
Same question as Randy. How was this shot - from what angle?
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| Photo By: arwa abdullah
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/17/2005 4:22:51 AM
Beautiful and vibrant. This one makes me hungry!
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| Photo By: Roland Lacson
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/16/2005 9:39:49 PM
Lovely portrait.
It would be nice if more attention was paid to the styling of her hair.
All the best, Andrew
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| Photo By: herwig b
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/16/2005 12:05:28 AM
Beautiful! What a wonderful palette of colors.
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Photo By: Vladimir Meshkov
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/16/2005 12:01:20 AM
Thank you for sharing your story and photograph.
Without you Tuffy would not have this extended life.
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| Photo By: Jim Christensen
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/15/2005 11:53:49 PM
I can feel the cool breeze. Nicely captured.
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| Photo By: José Moreira
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/15/2005 11:52:38 PM
Captivating and dramatic. Could be a movie still of a flick I would like to see.
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| Photo By: ciler erbil
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/15/2005 11:47:43 PM
It appears that he is as interested in us as we are interested in him.
Wonderfully captured.
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| Photo By: Magnus Beierlein
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
7/15/2005 11:34:34 PM
Thank you Magnus and Biritia. You put into words much of what I was hoping to capture.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
(K:423)
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
6/29/2005 6:34:11 AM
A very interesting mix of color.
Imagine this photograph without these lovely shadows ? I can?t.
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| Photo By: Mark Wlaz
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
5/2/2005 6:18:29 AM
This is pleasing to look at. Your diagonal framing works with this assortment of textures and shapes.
It would be nice to experiment and see if that light that is hitting that wall could be balanced and that shadow removed with some gentle reflected light.
Thank you for sharing your work.
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| Photo By: Laszlo Illes
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Critique By:
Andrew Semansco (K:423)
5/2/2005 6:11:04 AM
Thank you all for your kind comments.
This was the one shot that "came together" for me that day.
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| Photo By: Andrew Semansco
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